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I've never been happy with the end of chapter one... and with all of the work I've been doing on writing/re-writing the later chapters and subsequent storylines, this ending works better for me.

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JasonAW3

Well, that's one way to put it, but it's more like, she disarmed herself... Don't worry, she's mostly armless...

zombieroomie

I thought it was funny and in character for her. I've written so much of her recently it fit a lot better than the old page.