Pg 87 (Patreon)

When I finish my commissions que and have more energy for this I'd like to work on my pacing. I like slow pace but I also think a lot of my pages could be achieved with half the amount of panels. This one would have been better if I'd cut the last panel and used panels from the next page there instead, but catching stuff like that would require me to spend more time on thumbs, which is it's own big time issue? Not saying anything here is bad, it's fine as is, just thinkin out loud. I have a loooot to learn about page composition, too. In the second and third panel they accidentally look like they're looking at each other haha