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Google docs link to a story.

This idea was pitched to me by someone else and I liked it enough to turn it into this story. Posted with their permission and would love some feedback. Would people like to see more of this story?

Let me know!

Thanks.

Em. X

https://docs.google.com/document/d/19pQBViQKoB23G8GFphcWIOEZPcHWjQGU-D7QmhcwwJQ/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Bob

Damn, that was some good stuff. I wouldn't mind some more stories that focus on censorship as an added control mechanism, either with a chip or in your hypnosis stories. Putting some pictures in there also really elevated this story! A part two to this would also be nice, maybe stuff like a digital chastity that may automatically increase the duration as well or introducing Sydney to the clinic and she can control the parameters as well

Steve H

Excellent concept, well executed (as ever). Great story. Could add an AI component as a ‘phase four’ 🤔

Joe

That’s definitely an interesting idea, if you write more I’m sure we’ll read it :)

Caged_Caroleta

Definitely a new direction to take I do wonder what else was in the box 😈and I can imagine he's not going to enjoy it but then again boobs aren't for betas......😈😈

Reader 1

I too loved that story, would not mind seeing syndey helping with phase 3 to take it to the next level.

D

Great story, but I think if you were to do a longer version you should redo it from the start. For pacing issues and to let the main character suffer in each phase for a little longer.