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“Will, come in. You don’t have to knock,” Arien called.

The door opened to reveal Reyna standing in the doorway, her bright red hair impossible to miss even in the dimmer light of the corridor.  She held herself with the same easy confidence Arien had noticed in class, chin slightly raised, as though appearing uninvited in someone else’s dormitory was perfectly normal.

Two boys stood behind her, both familiar from class despite Arien never having spoken to either of them. 

Matt was tall and broad-shouldered for his age, with short brown hair and the build of someone who looked misplaced anywhere outside the House of the Sword. 

Sebastian was almost his opposite, short and remarkably thin, with dark hair and sharp features that made him look a little older than he probably was. 

“Reyna?” Pori asked. The change in her was subtle enough that Arien might have missed it a month earlier. She straightened slightly, her casual posture disappearing, and the easy expression she wore around them became something more composed. “What are you doing here?”

“Hello, Pori.” Reyna smiled. “I hope you don’t mind me inviting myself in.”

Pori’s answering smile was perfectly pleasant. “You already have.”

Gilly covered a laugh with a cough. Reyna appeared completely unfazed. Her attention settled on the flame above Arien’s palm.

“I see the rumors were true. These gatherings aren’t purely social.”

Arien looked down and realized he had completely forgotten about the flame. He extinguished it with a thought.

“We never intended to make them secret,” Pori said. “But you still haven’t answered my question.”

Reyna stepped inside, allowing Matt and Sebastian to follow before closing the door behind them. 

“Do any of you know what’s happening in the other first-year classes?”

“No,” Gilly said immediately. “Why would we?”

“What about later semesters?” Reyna asked. “Do you know how the examinations affect class rankings? How rewards are distributed? How Masters are assigned?”

Bud frowned. “We’ve barely been here a month.”

“Exactly.”

“Reyna,” Pori interrupted gently, “you clearly came here for a reason. Be a dear and save us the interrogation.”

Reyna’s smile widened. “We missed you at the Summer Solstice Ball.”

Arien had known Pori came from an important family, but until now she had mostly been the girl who complained about homework, scolded Gilly, and stole half his bed during their study sessions. The girl sitting there now looked much more like Poriette Miley, heir to one of the wealthiest noble families in Wyndor outside the Old Houses.

“I’m sure you survived.”

Matt glanced at Sebastian. Sebastian merely raised an eyebrow, the faintest hint of amusement appearing on his face. Apparently, whatever history existed between Pori and Reyna was not news to him.

Reyna laughed softly. “Fine. Straight to the point.”

She pulled the empty chair away from the wall and sat down without asking.

“There are five first-year classes, and those remain our official groups. Later, once people start unlocking different Aspects and qualifying for specialized courses, our schedules will overlap less and less. But the Academy will still track our class results separately.”

“We know that much,” Gilly said.

“Then you probably also know that stronger classes tend to receive more attention from better Masters. Later, rankings matter for other things as well. Rewards. Opportunities. Certain courses and training options. The exact scoring system is complicated, but the important part isn’t.”

Bud leaned forward. “So the better a class performs, the better it gets treated.”

“Exactly.”

Pori frowned. “How much do the top students actually matter?”

“Enough that the ten best-performing students determine most of a class’s position. After that, everyone contributes considerably less.”

Bud considered that. “So if the strongest students do well enough, they can keep the class near the top even if the rest perform only average.”

“More or less,” Reyna said. “That’s why people who know how the Academy works start putting training groups together almost from the beginning, instead of waiting for the first examinations.”

“And you want one too,” Pori said.

“I already have one.”

Reyna gestured toward the boys beside her. Matt gave them an easy nod, while Sebastian offered a small smile while his eyes moved briefly across the group.

“Both of them have already discovered their first Aspects. What I’m proposing is that our groups work together.”

Gilly narrowed her eyes. “Half the class follows you around. You could train with practically anyone.”

“True.”

“So why us?”

Reyna tilted her head. “Your father never told you how the Academy works?”

Gilly’s expression darkened immediately. “Your habit of answering every question with another question is starting to annoy me.”

Reyna laughed. “I like you.”

“That makes one of us.”

“Gilly,” Pori warned, although Arien could see the corner of her mouth twitching.

Reyna leaned back in the chair. “Because quality matters more than numbers. Matt and Sebastian have already proven they have potential. I know what I can do. And I have a fairly good idea what everyone in this room is capable of.”

“Do you?” Pori asked.

“Your family has produced excellent mages for generations,” Reyna said to Pori. “Gilly has clearly had good instruction, Melli already discovered Water, and Budram knows things half the class has never needed to learn.” She glanced toward Arien. “There’s enough potential here.”

“And what do you expect in return?” Pori asked.

Reyna spread her hands. “Does there have to be something?”

Pori merely looked at her.

“Fine,” Reyna conceded. “I want our class to win.”

“Why?”

“Because I dislike losing.” That answer, at least, sounded honest. “And because Efie has apparently gathered a rather impressive group in her own class,” Reyna added. “If we do nothing, we’ll spend the next several years watching them take the best positions.”

Pori’s eyes narrowed slightly.

“Rey, we’ve known each other for more than a day. Mel and Arien have Aspects, but the rest of us don’t. If all you cared about was immediate results, you could recruit three more students who already have theirs.”

“If all I wanted were students who were ahead right now, I would choose differently,” Reyna said. “I’m more interested in where people will be in a few years.” She glanced at Arien. “And you’re forgetting him.”

Arien frowned. “Me?”

“You’re the only person in our year who can realistically compete with Efie.”

That was news to him. “Why?”

Reyna looked confused by the question. “Because she has two Aspects.”

A small, unpleasant suspicion began forming in Arien’s mind. Reyna continued before he could stop her. “And so do you.”

Bud and Pori both turned toward him. Gilly looked as though someone had personally betrayed her.

Reyna looked between them. “You didn’t know?”

“Two Aspects?” Gilly said. “Arien, you have two Aspects and you didn’t tell us?”

Arien suddenly felt uncomfortably warm.

Training in the Infirmary did not automatically mean that he possessed the Life Aspect, and he had been putting off telling the others about it until each of them had discovered at least one Aspect of their own. With everyone already obsessing over who was ahead and who was falling behind, announcing that he had two had seemed like an excellent way to make things worse.

He did not want to build these new friendships on lies or half-truths, but staying off the Factions' radar, at least at first, meant greater safety for both him and the people close to him. His plan was to reveal the extent of his abilities gradually, making it look like natural progress rather than evidence that he was hiding something worth investigating.

Besides, he was not naive enough to believe that his friends told him everything either, and he did not hold that against them.

Reyna looked genuinely surprised by their reaction, which meant she had probably assumed his second Aspect was common knowledge. Arien was more interested in how she had learned about it in the first place.

She knew far more about the Academy and its students than he had realized. He made a mental note to be considerably more careful around her.

“Yes, Gilly. I have two Aspects,” he admitted. “I’m sorry I didn’t tell you. With everyone already worried about discovering their first, I thought announcing another one would only make things worse.”

Gilly stared at him. “So you felt sorry for us?”

“That isn’t what I said.”

“It sounds like it,” Gilly said, quieter this time.

Pori shifted beside her. “Gilly.”

“What? He’s sitting there acting as though keeping it secret was somehow for our benefit.”

“Maybe because it was.” Pori’s tone remained calm. “He’s spent hours letting us sit here and interrupt his own practice because he wanted to help. Don’t turn this into something it isn’t.”

Gilly looked from Arien to Mel’s bowl and Bud’s scattered papers. After a moment, she lowered her eyes.

“I’m sorry,” she muttered.

“It’s alright. We all know your mouth is considerably faster than your brain.”

Gilly stared at him. Then she grabbed the nearest pillow and threw it directly at his face. Arien caught it with both hands.

“See? Much better.”

“Idiot.”

Truthfully, he wasn’t angry. Gilly was impulsive, competitive, and apparently capable of turning almost any discussion about magic into a personal crisis, but none of that made her cruel. If anything, Arien suspected she would be the first person in the room to rush to someone’s aid without stopping to consider whether doing so was sensible.

“Wait.” Bud leaned forward. “Your second Aspect is Life, isn’t it? That’s why you’re allowed into the Infirmary,” Bud continued, visibly pleased with himself. “First-years normally don’t get practical Healing lessons.”

Wonderful.

“Alright,” Arien said before anyone else could join in. “Yes. One of them is Life.” Gilly’s eyes widened again. “But before all of you start interrogating me, can we get back to Reyna’s proposal?”

“Oh, don’t stop on our account,” Reyna said. She had remained seated throughout the entire exchange, watching with open fascination. “I came prepared for several possible responses to my proposal. This wasn’t one of them.”

Arien narrowed his eyes. “You’re enjoying this.”

“A little.” Her smile widened.

Bud ignored them both. “Does that mean you can actually heal people?”

“Minor wounds and stuff like that.”

Gilly stared at him. “Sometimes I genuinely hate you.”

“Only sometimes?”

She reached for the pillow again, remembered that Arien was still holding it, and settled for glaring.

“Now I understand,” said Pori, and Reyna tilted her head. “Would you mind if we gave you our answer tomorrow?”

“Not at all.” Reyna stood and smoothed the front of her robe. “I didn’t expect you to agree immediately.” Her attention shifted toward Arien. “And I am sorry about mentioning your Aspect. I genuinely thought everyone here already knew.”

Arien studied her for a moment. As far as he could tell, she meant it.

“Fine. Just don’t tell anyone else.”

Reyna nodded. “I won’t. I hope you all have a pleasant evening.”

She headed for the door. Sebastian followed, but paused before stepping into the corridor.

“For what it’s worth,” he said, “everyone who matters probably knows already.”

“That does not make me feel better.”

Sebastian smiled and followed Reyna out.

Matt remained behind. For several seconds, he seemed unsure whether he was supposed to follow them or say something first. Eventually, he rubbed the back of his neck.

“I know Reyna can be… a lot.”

“That’s one way to put it,” Gilly said.

Matt smiled awkwardly. “She really is helpful once you get to know her. She just has a habit of making the plan first and asking whether anyone agrees with it afterward.”

That sounded sufficiently accurate to earn a quiet laugh from Pori.

“I hope we get the chance to train together,” Matt added. His gaze moved around the crowded room. “You seem like an interesting group.”

“Interesting is also one way to put it,” Arien said.

Matt laughed. “See you tomorrow.”

“Bye,” Gilly said as he stepped into the corridor.

Once Matt left, Bud looked at Gilly with a grin.

“What?” she asked.

“Nothing. I was merely thinking that Matt seems very—”

“Don’t.”

“—handsome.”

Gilly launched herself at him with a battle cry.

The next few seconds dissolved into chaos. Bud tried to defend himself, someone nearly knocked Mel’s bowl onto the floor, and Arien had to snatch his homework out of the way before it became collateral damage.

By the time order returned, Bud was sporting several fresh fingernail marks across his wrists and had been forced to issue a formal apology for what Gilly described as his slanderous and completely unfounded accusations.

Conversation eventually returned to Reyna’s proposal. They went over the possible benefits, argued about whether working with her group would actually help, and agreed to think about it until tomorrow.

Arien listened, but part of his attention remained on Reyna. She had known about the other classes, the ranking system, Efie’s group, and even his second Aspect.

Until now, most of his attention at the Academy had gone toward classes, practice, and keeping up with the workload. Reyna had just shown him that some students were already thinking several steps beyond that.

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PJ

Thanks for the chapter !

Grymm

Tftc!!

Xander

Thank you for the chapter!

Zeke

The things Arien chooses to keep secret continue to make no sense from HIS perspective. It's continually taking me out of the story. I get the writing wanting to follow this trope, but this is something that he knew many other students were already aware of, and his friends already knew he was inexplicably in the infirmary for lessons. The idea that they wouldn't know about it anyway is hard to accept just based on that. I think maybe part of this frustration with him hiding so much to his own seeming detriment is that it's also being hidden from readers? It's been like 20+ chapters since he's visibly progressed at all, and even that was just seeing his status sheet without ever seeing what he could really do outside of healing. All of his training in the interim has been referenced with throw away lines without us ever seeing it. If the intent is to build up to a big reveal scene, the buildup shouldn't be a consequence of frustration and confusion with how the main character is acting.

Silver Beard

Too many ladies in his preview; perhaps pining for his mentor isn't so bad. The rest can't complain... too much?

Hollowlce

I'm going to be honest I didn't enjoy this chapter. It seems like things are being rushed, I'm fine with calculating social manipulators but only with probable cause. We've seen one interaction with Reyna which was literally her staring across the room at Arien with a group of people that was it. No mention of her skill or competence before this moment. Effi was only seen in the admissions chapter. Also Arien is literally seeming more and more like an idiot, letting some random stranger walk into his room with no pushback or stopping them. First letting effi walk all over him now Reyna. By this point especially with his emissary title granting Increased chance for developing new aspects he's not gained any new aspects. Not even unlocking common or uncommon ones??? It just seems like a lot is implied with the new academy characters without actually having told it in the story/chapters themselves, it's jarring and breaking the immersion.

Silver Beard

If the cat's out of the bag on affinities- he really should get out of that class altogether. Words of Power was mentioned a few times in previous chapters... that sounds like something that would suit him a lot better. Continue to be surprised his level/stats haven't come up in conversation with his roomie or new friends. Nobody has gotten any levels? Can't believe the girls wouldn't gossip about it... at least a little..| Playing on the assumption they are all recently awakened which means they all should be getting some levels regularly until 10th. But there's not a single mention anywhere?

Slashman1

That's just it, his power makes him a target he is a commoner and possibly even chaos touched in a way that would get him killed by the church let alone him being brought from another world and he is still 8 years old if he revealed just how powerful he is he would make so many enemies and be hugely suspicious

Slashman1

I dont Reyna she seems stuck up and likes playing games, she will be a problem in the future I can tell

Zeke

I feel like you maybe didn't process my comment all the way. He's being a lot more suspicious than he has to be by hiding things which don't make any sense to hide. I'm not saying the trope doesn't make sense at all for this story, but the way it's being executed doesn't follow a coherent chain of reasoning from Arien's perspective. It doesn't even come across like he's making a mistake either, because we're not seeing him perceive the situation then reach the wrong conclusion or anything like that. It more seems like he's adhering to the trope independently of his characterization, even when doing so makes it harder for him to achieve the goal of staying less conspicuous. I wouldn't have any problem if he was just being dumb, but he's not really doing that. He's acting out-of-character, both for him specifically as Arien and just for any generic character inhabiting the world from his position.

mt

I don’t understand why should MC care. Like the big study groups don’t bring him much new, no? Most of other students are worse then he is. And this talk with who gets the best masters for the classes looks to me like not a problem at all. I am pretty sure the top performers in whatever class they are will be rewarded ( and a mental adult that gets much more stats per level then other kids + discovers aspects quicker + good work ethic CANNOT not prosper in this environment, cheats are too strong ) Like I get it if we he does this for his new friends, but not for some random 8 y.o. , who wants to manipulate her better to do rivalry with other classes

R. Maxwell Steele

Yep working in a public clinic is obviously public information. Acting like it's a secret calls out even more attention than not. Like he's going to act like his hair color is a secret next? People have eyes.

R. Maxwell Steele

Agreed. He would be better off keeping his group small and using his insights to help them pull ahead. He should be able to guide them to get aspects fairly easily.

Baconwargod

Really interested to see how he will unlock Words of Power and if he can ask his Master if death would be a good pick up feels like there’s real potential for the two to act synergistically if he’s smart enough for both healing and offense.

help me

Him going to the infirmary doesn’t mean he has life or second aspect, from his point of view he thought it might be interpreted as something he is interested in. There is no good time to tell them the truth imagine someone struggling and he announces he has life as a second aspect it might look like him showing off.

Elle

They both have a harem. everyone knows you don't merge harems.

Silver Beard

“Yes. One of them is Life.” Ooops?! They already knew he had fire, now life, and there's obviously another.

Silver Beard

That's one thing that hasn't come up in the intro classes. Skills. The limiting number. It was wise to keep a couple slots open or was it?

Emissary of Nothingness

"He had been putting off telling the others about Life until each of them had discovered at least one Aspect of their own. With everyone already obsessing over who was ahead and who was falling behind, announcing that he had two had seemed like an excellent way to make things worse." - I thought his intentions were pretty clear. It’s not about being “mysterious”; it’s more like not going to a friend who can’t find a job just to brag that you got promoted.

Emissary of Nothingness

Actually, there was a a mention about her competence." A surprisingly large group gathered around the red-haired girl. Arien had learned her name during the lesson. Reyna. She had participated more than anyone else, but not in the irritating way Arien remembered from certain students back on Earth who answered every question just to show everyone else how much they knew. Reyna listened, challenged answers she disagreed with, and drew quieter students into the discussion. Sonnia had even praised her twice. Arien could see why people gathered around her."

Emissary of Nothingness

Most of them are worse at Mana Manipulation, but they also know a lot more about the world and about magic in general. Don’t forget that some of the students have already spent years learning under people who actually understand magic and spells, unlike Arien, who spent a huge amount of time feeling his way around in the dark.

Hollowlce

This shows she asks questions, it doesn't show personal skill or competence. Maybe if she had diffused a social conflict, seen navigating social divides or seen in places where you could reasonably link her gained knowledge it would be more believable. Not to mention just appearing at someone's door with no soft social approaches beforehand or building up some kind of personal interaction with Arien and expecting people to agree and go along with her doesnt scream socially skilled to me. If she was magnetic enough you would be agreeing or siding with her by her preexisting actions before she'd started talking. Doesn't help that everything she wants them to believe she infodumps onto them as she arrives, destroys Ariens own social climate with revealing his affinities and just seems to be exceedingly arrogant which clashes with her and your quoted statement of her being open and approachable previously. Again we don't even know if she has the practical skills to support her claim of being able the be one of the top students just her word on it. Theirs only so much weight "being noble trained" can carry without actually showing how vast or little that difference makes. I'm not saying it wouldn't work it just needs more justification or groundwork to make it more digestable.

Emissary of Nothingness

Okay, I can see how it might come across that way from a reader’s perspective. Thanks for explaining it. I’ll keep that in mind during the final edit. My intention, though, was for Reyna to come in with some momentum and shake things up a bit before Arien had a chance to fully bunker down in his comfort zone.

Hollowlce

I mean depending how you want to portray her she could have confronted Arien after he left one of his infirmary sessions by alluding to revealing his life affinity to others. Already implying inviting or providing personal support for him to join her or her house. Finding a way to force Arien to show more of his abilities that she suspects he has or backing him into a corner in public socially that he can't escape from with either good or bad intent.

Zeke

I mean, I think the issues I'm having with it are similarly pretty clear. I did describe them at some length. Him having that thought in the chapter is part of what feels inconsistent with the character and world. Was he under the impression that the other students in the infirmary were sworn to secracy? Did he also think that his friends were unaware of his time there? Did they spend the last month simply not thinking about why Arien was the only first year in the infirmary? For his lie to make sense as a genuine effort to spare his friends' feelings, he has to think they wouldn't find out from anyone else, that they wouldn't ask questions about/figure out why he was in the infirmary, and that lying to them about something like this would have no consequences for their perception of his inclination to hide things. The fact that all those things turned out to be true is the primary thing that feels unbelievable about the situation. It involves the world and characters being static in the time we're told passes before the scene. I honestly wouldn't normally say anything, but things like this keep happening. Him withholding information from his healer teacher about how he got his aspect and specialization, as an example. The fact that he has those things is already known to be extraordinary, he knows that it's considered so, and he know the person asking about his experience is more intimately familiar with this field of magic than anyone else he's encountered. With that in mind, why does he withhold information about the desperate life-and-death situations he's been in that fully explain his abilities, instead opting for essentially saying he's just that much of a precocious genius. Which is supposed to be the actual thing he's trying to hide, and just makes her suspicious he's hiding something where she wouldn't have been before. It's another situation where Arien lies to accomplish seemingly nothing but making it obvious to other characters that he's got things to hide. Again, the issue I'm having is that the characters aren't acting in ways that seem consistent with what we know about them or the world. It feels like they don't exist or have agency between the scenes we see on the page, and it doesn't feel like Arien is interacting with other people as if he has a theory of mind in relation to them. He doesn't treat them like curious entities capable of connecting dots on their own, and I guess it's just his luck so far that he seems to be correct in that regard. I'm sorry to be harsh here, but the dismissive nature of your reply irked me. The issues I'm talking about are a consequence of me thinking about what's written, not simply a matter of me not fully reading the easily digestible chapters. Maybe this is a relatively isolated problem amongst your readers, but I can only speak to my experience.

Zeke

Bud makes a point to highlight Arien being "allowed" in the infirmary, then reinforces it saying that first years aren't usually given practical healing lessons. The story makes a point that the life aspect is a well-known and noteworthy thing. The idea that these characters aren't capable of connecting these dots over the previous month seems dubious at best. Also, more of an aside, but Arien showing off is the entire stated reason for this group congregating in his room, and that point gets reinforced several times in just this chapter. The demonstration is obviously intended to help, but him being worried about "showing off" as a primary justification for lying, while simultaneously having his friends mention how much he's flexing on them multiple times in the same scene, is really funny.

Baconwargod

Yeah but I think that’s okay he’s not some uber savvy dude he’s just smart enough he knows he needs to keep his cards close. Not how to make it look like he isn’t keeping them close though.

kyle

I'm not sure i disagree. What you're saying makes sense. I wasn't thrown at all personally because this is exactly how I would react. It wouldn't be a logical or calculated move for me, but a desire not to hurt feelings and make the social situation worse. It would be a bit Condescending towards the others. That's not how the chapter describes it (as if it were a character flaw) but that is how I see it. It's woth considering that he has to lie to them about some things. Not about this, but if he's already lying to them, it's easier to draw that line closer then it would be otherwise.

shacochan

I agree with Arian's decision to hide his skills so far, lest the history of the young talented mage be retold. However, his decision to not share his life aspect is plane idiocy considering he had revealed it to noble society. What else did he expect would happened?

Kreylix

LOL, but yes.