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Arien sat in the shade of a massive chestnut tree at the edge of the Sands, the grass beneath him finally cool after a day of summer heat. The air still carried the smell of warm sand and trampled grass, mixed with sweat and leather from the four students sparring nearby.

Wooden weapons cracked against one another while Arien kept part of his attention on the four faint connections of Guardian of Life stretching toward the fighters.

The duels attracted both irritated and interested glances from the students who had chosen the strip of greenery for their evening relaxation. Each fighter carried a wooden weapon, and every clash produced a sharp crack. At least three groups of older students had already gathered their notes and moved elsewhere.

Nobody complained.

The four Sword House students were fighting hard enough that approaching them to argue about the noise probably did not seem worth the effort. Will’s opponent, Uto, swung his two-handed sword with enough force that a clean hit could easily break bone despite the wooden blade. Will met him with a bastard sword and shield, attacking with just as much aggression.

Neither had managed to gain a lasting advantage.

Arien followed the exchange closely. His Perception was high enough now that he could track every strike and thrust in detail, and he found himself wondering whether they had already reached the level of the finalists he had watched years ago in Ribenne.

Both duals had been going for nearly fifteen minutes. All four students were drenched in sweat, breathing heavily, but none of them seemed willing to admit defeat.

Will grimaced as another blow slammed into his shield. He redirected the strike and answered with a slash toward Uto’s chest, forcing the larger boy to pull his sword back in time to parry.

A sudden drain on Arien’s mana told him that someone had taken another serious hit.

"That's enough!"

Both pairs immediately separated and exchanged respectful bows before dropping onto the ground to catch their breath.

“I was just starting to gain the upper hand,” Belia complained after a minute.

The fourteen-year-old girl fought with two one-handed swords, and somehow managed to hold her own against opponents much heavier than she was. Hoyt, sprawled several paces away and gulping air, clearly lacked the energy to dispute her claim.

“That’s true,” Arien admitted. “Your last hit took quite a bit of mana.”

“It’s a shame you don’t have more of it.”

Arien raised both eyebrows.

“I’ve heard mages use special crystals to increase their reserves,” Belia continued. “Couldn’t you get one? I’m sure all of us would contribute if it meant we could fight for a few more minutes.”

Arien wasn’t sure whether to laugh or be offended. Depending on how his classmates distributed their Attributes, he practically had twice as much mana as most of them. His Vitality also regenerated enough during the fights to extend their sessions by several minutes.

And Belia, who could barely breathe, was suggesting that his reserves were the problem.

“Belia, mana crystals are incredibly expensive, and after a few recharges they usually lose their properties and most of their value,” Will explained as he slowly stood and removed his leather breastplate.

Arien felt the familiar stab of envy at the sight of his friend’s physique. Will had grown enormously over the last few years. He stood almost a head taller than Arien now, his shoulders broader from years of sword training and the last traces of childhood softness gone from his face. Combined with his skill with a sword, that had made him rather popular with girls throughout the Academy.

“We should be grateful for every minute we get,” Will continued. “Arien is already using most of his mana for us.”

Despite everything else that had changed, Will was still the same earnest boy who divided most things into right and wrong. Arien particularly enjoyed watching girls attempt to flirt with him. Will never seemed to notice, and even obvious invitations were rejected because they interfered with training.

He was wrong about one thing, though. Arien had not used all of his mana.

Almost a quarter remained, deliberately held back in case one of the fights went badly. So far, he had never needed that reserve.

His second Life Aspect Specialization was the reason. He had reached it at the beginning of the semester, much to Lamaral’s surprise, and after hours of discussing the options with her, two choices had remained.

Guardian of Life: increases understanding of Life magic, allows you to place allies under your protection, granting passive regeneration. In addition, you can cast both Life magic and non-aspected magic through the thread connecting you to them.

Field Healer: increases understanding of Life magic, allows you to create a Dome of Life in which allies receive passive regeneration, while Life spells become more efficient and cost less mana.

Arien preferred Guardian of Life. Lamaral favored Field Healer, a Specialization she possessed herself.

Her reasoning was difficult to argue with. A Dome of Life could be established in a military camp, an Explorer encampment, a Portal, or even an infirmary. Once established, it required little concentration to maintain and could keep large numbers of wounded people alive until a Healer reached them.

Guardian of Life  however, connected the Healer directly to selected allies, increasing their regeneration and allowing Life magic to reach them even in the middle of combat. Non-aspected spells such as Magic Shield could also be cast through the connection.

Lamaral had never personally known anyone who chose it. From what she had read, it was mostly used by combat Healers attached to permanent parties, and maintaining several connections while actively protecting people could consume enormous amounts of mana.  Lamaral saw little reason for him to specialize so narrowly.

He chose Guardian of Life anyway.

Her arguments made sense, but they did not account for one thing she did not know: how much mana Arien actually possessed or how quickly he regenerated it. He was careful in the Infirmary and rarely let his reserves fall below half, partly because he had no desire to explain where so many Attribute points had come from.

More importantly, Arien did not want to spend his life working in an infirmary. He respected the work, but spending every day surrounded by sickness, and people he could not always save had never felt like the life he wanted. He wanted to travel, preferably with people he trusted, and as a mage he would depend on companions capable of keeping enemies away from him.

Protecting those companions seemed like a worthwhile use of mana.

After several months of practice with Will, Uto, Belia, and Hoyt, he had no regrets. Maintaining the connections had become easier, and he was still discovering ways to reduce their cost and use them more efficiently.

The Sword House students were equally pleased. According to them, they normally had only one class each week where they could fight at full intensity, and even then the matches rarely lasted more than a few minutes.

They begged him to train with them every day, but he managed to limit it to three times per week, truthfully explaining that he still had other things he needed to study.

“I’m sorry about Belia. She’s a bit upset after losing two duels during today’s exams,” Will said as they walked back toward the dormitories.

“No need to apologize. Exams do that to people. Half my class has looked ready for a nervous breakdown all week.”

“How did yours go? I didn’t want to ask in front of the others.”

“Good. And I mean genuinely good, not ‘I don’t want you to worry’ good.”

“I never doubted you. Progress matters more than ranking.”

Arien looked at him. “Woah, Will. Such wisdom. Let me guess, that’s from your favorite book?”

“No. It’s from you. You told me that in our second year, when everyone thought you’d be expelled.” He paused. “The Knight’s Path focuses on different things.”

“Ah.” Arien rubbed the back of his neck. “I might have said something like that.”

He often said similar things when trying to encourage people. Will was one of the few people who remembered them word for word.

“What about you? First in your year again?”

“Probably. I did reasonably well on the theory exams, and the physical tests went well. I think the gap between me and the others is getting larger.” Will hesitated. “Master Kraven told me I should consider entering the King’s Tournament next year.”

“That’s great.” Arien glanced at him. Will had sounded pleased enough when talking about his exams, but the moment he mentioned the tournament, his tone had changed. “You don’t sound very happy about it.”

“It’s not that.” Will sighed. “I’m confident I could defeat most students in the years above me, but I don’t know how far that actually gets me. And when I think about Prince Cedrick...”

“Then stop comparing yourself to Cedrick. Right now he has an advantage because he can use magic. Once you start gaining active abilities of your own, that difference should shrink. You already know what I think about hybrids.”

“Sometimes I don’t believe you when you say you don’t have any special knowledge about the System.”

Arien snorted. “You have no idea how much I wish I knew even half of what children from the Old Houses do. Planning everything with general information and educated guesses is terrifying.”

Will stared at him. “There. That.”

“What?”

“‘Planning everything.’ ‘Building your class.’ Sometimes you say things I’ve never heard anyone else say, and we grew up in the same region.”

Arien opened his mouth, but Will waved it away.

“Never mind. Have you heard about the new attacks on the border?”

Arien straightened. “No. What attacks? Is Ribenne safe?”

“Yes,” Will said immediately. “Ribenne is safe. Sorry, I should’ve started with that. Several villages east of Fenork were hit.”

Arien’s shoulders eased slightly. “That’s pretty far from Ribenne. How did you hear about it?”

“Malbek wrote to me. His Explorer team was hunting Monsters in the area.”

“So Tyranny again?”

“No one knows. There were apparently no witnesses, and the villages were simply empty.”

Arien frowned. “Empty?”

“No bodies.”

For a moment, flashes of the burned remains of his parents and neighbors seared his mind.

“Then why hasn’t there been anything in the newspapers? They’ve spent the last week writing about a brawl between sailors in Uthell where three humans and an orc died.”

“I don’t know. Maybe the news hasn’t reached Wayhold yet.” Will’s mouth tightened. “Or maybe a few missing border villages nobody here has heard of aren’t considered important enough.”

“I’ll ask Reyna. She usually hears about scandals before they reach the papers.”

They walked in silence for a while, passing students who seemed more energetic than usual. Some were already carrying luggage, eager to leave as soon as the semester officially ended. Most would wait until tomorrow’s results or stay another night to celebrate in the Port.

“Do you think they’re still alive?” Will asked quietly.

Arien did not need to ask who he meant. His thoughts went immediately to the members of their families who had disappeared beyond the eastern border.

“I don’t know.”

Years had passed, and almost everything reaching Wyndor from Tyranny was rumor. There were stories of unrest and rebellion, but little that Arien trusted. The Kingdom had almost certainly sent spies across the border by now, yet very little reliable information ever reached the public.

“But I still think there’s a chance,” he said. “If they were taken as slaves and survived the first few months, they may simply be working somewhere in captivity.”

“Even with a civil war?”

“A slave is property. If one faction defeats another, they’ll take whatever is valuable. Artifacts, land, money, slaves.” Arien hated how cold the logic sounded, but it was one of the few things that gave him hope. “If our families survived the beginning, they may have survived the years since.”

“I hate this.” Will kicked one of the stones lining the path hard enough to send it bouncing into the grass.

“We’ve trained for years, and we’re still nowhere near being able to rescue anyone. Every year that passes makes the chances worse. Sometimes I wonder what the point of any of it is.”

Arien let him continue.

“Our enemies could have decades of levels on us. Even if we become strong enough to defeat a few of them, we can’t fight an entire country. And Wyndor doesn’t seem interested in rescuing anyone. The army has been sitting on the border for years and still can’t even protect the villages there.”

“Will.”

His friend kept walking, jaw clenched.

“Will, enough.”

That finally stopped him.

Arien faced him. “I’m not saying any of that is wrong. I worry about the same things. But none of it changes what you can do today.”

Will stayed silent.

“You can train. You can get stronger. And when the time comes to actually do something, you’ll be in a better position than you are now.”

“That might still not be enough.”

“It might not.” Arien shrugged. “But being weaker certainly won’t help.”

Will frowned, staring down at the ground.

Arien knew the advice was easier to give than follow. He worried about the future more often than he liked to admit, but Will was still young, and Arien tried to keep as much of that worry off his shoulders as he could. Spending every day thinking about his murdered father and missing siblings would not bring any of them back. Training, at least, gave him something he could control.

After a while, Will nodded. “You’re right.” He was quiet for several more steps before adding, “The path of a true Knight is to protect those who need protection, not merely pursue a selfish desire for revenge. Evil must be defeated with a pure heart, or we risk becoming corrupted by it ourselves.”

Arien stared at him. “Uh... sure. That too.” 

They reached the point where they usually split up.

“See you at the Leaky Mug?”

“Yeah. I promised I’d come.” Will sounded less than enthusiastic. He had never cared much for taverns or drinking, but Arien considered it his responsibility to occasionally drag his friend into activities that did not involve swords.

They parted, and Arien continued toward the dormitories.

His thoughts returned to Ribenne, to Alia and Sari. Their letters said they were doing well, though he still missed them more than he usually admitted.

Years had passed, but he still held on to the hope that somewhere beyond the eastern border, part of his family was alive and that one day he would see them again.

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Comments

PJ

Thanks for the chapter !

Richard David Reily

Hey I think there is a slight error in continuity. You had arien reveal his stats to lamaral in a chapter. Maybe two or three ago. So I understand he's hiding it from other students but lamaral already knows about his higher attributes due to being a mage vs novice mage. In this chapter you say that "Her arguments made sense, but they did not account for one thing she did not know: how much mana Arien actually possessed or how quickly he regenerated it. He was careful in the Infirmary and rarely let his reserves fall below half, partly because he had no desire to explain where so many Attribute points had come from" It might just be how it's written and he never told her his level. I'm not fully sure.

mt

Why all of characters introduced have only uncommon affinities. We haven’t seen anyone with Life, Death or Lighting. Doesn’t Academy host those affinities classes to help students find new affinities. Seems logical that at least somebody of top students have to have uncommon affinities.

CMA27

The last few chapters feel like little has happened

Tincan39

This chapter takes place before chapter 73 right?

Br0k3nk3yb0ard

there is a slight emotional disconnect from the main character in the latest chapters. At first we followed the mc through everything, herding cows, going to the pond studying, literally everything, and we grew to care for him, and then came the first time skip, and the mc became slightly stranger, not by much, but noticeably, we got introduced to a slew of new characters, and we started discovering the mc again, but before that happened, another time skip came about, most of those new characters became irrelevant, and more importantly , the mc became a stranger again, and this time, the emotional disconnect became obvious , this might be personal to me, but i feel as if the time skip of the first four years of the academy diluted the emotional rapport the reader had with the main character, just an opinion.

Bereftreader

Doesn’t he also get a bunch of extra stats from his emissary trait and avenger trait? I assume those are the stat bonuses he’s hiding from her.

Darune Albane

I can see a couple of POV chapters from his family

Hermes

The academy arc is not hitting like I thought it would.

Br0k3nk3yb0ard

there was a great deal of potential, the first year at least should have been explored, teachers, students, dynamics, competition, exploration of the system, misconceptions that mc had, actual teaching and so much more.

Silver Beard

Thank you for sharing your story

Red Potato

I agree as well. Like Bud was introduced and the left off screen but also supposedly affected the MC, but we don’t get to see their relationship.

Zeke

I can't pretend I've sat down to do the math, but shouldn't Arien have way more than twice the mana of even the most advanced students his age? Why would the stat gap between him and the others be closing? He started years earlier with a larger base and grows faster. Just based on how things have been presented thus far, I'd expect the difference to be closer to an order of magnitude or more.

Emissary of Nothingness

No, first there was drinking before the exams, then the end of the exams and training, and now we’re getting the post-exam drinking. :)

Emissary of Nothingness

Unfortunately, I think time skips are pretty much necessary in a newborn isekai. Otherwise, by chapter 300 you still have a nine-year-old fighting dragons. As for the first year at the Academy, maybe, but I preferred to let us experience Arien’s magical development through more interesting things than just sitting in a classroom and cramming theory. I hope that by the end of the third arc, which is roughly as long as the first two arcs combined, you’ll feel that the way I handled it made sense. As for Arien himself, I think over the next few chapters we’ll slowly start moving back toward a closer POV with him. Thanks for opinion anyway.

Emissary of Nothingness

Yes and no. Some of the students are just as talented as he is, with their own Traits and natural advantages, and some of them had already been training before entering the Academy. That said, Arien’s overall stats are higher. The difference is that the others don’t necessarily invest as much into Vitality as he does, and may focus more heavily on things like Intellect or Perception instead.

Zeke

Maybe I'm misinterpreting here, but isn't unlocking the System at 3 years old representative of an absolutely unprecedented level of talent? Six is suggested to be transcendental as it is. I get that his experience from a previous life gives him a huge leg up in some regards, but I hadn't thought that meant he was otherwise near the normative range for a given generation.

Emissary of Nothingness

As for talent, he is gifted, but he’s not some once-in-a-generation magical genius. He has his own advantages, and those advantages will compound over time, but the other students are working hard too. A lot of that should become clearer during the upcoming trip to Reznan Forest, where they’ll finally get a chance to compete with each other a bit more directly.

Zeke

Gotcha. Thank you for the explanation.

Silver Beard

It was written already by author, In This Chapter, that progressive students are tutored at home and only enter the Academy at/after the 5th year. Perhaps you should try reading vs skimming?!

Ondrej Hanslik

This time skip feels weird and the continuity between chapters suffers even if there is no time skip. Lots of characters have been introduced in a short time and everyone is already best friends while we barely know anything about these characters. The story has recently started to feel like a TV show and not as a written story.

Az6

1.5-2x mana compared to classmates means the classmates are at least level 18 :)

Slashman1

Well sadly it is still a school, nothing really exciting happens even in real schools

Slashman1

I see you author, somethings coming I can feel it

Br0k3nk3yb0ard

i agree, time skips are very useful tools, but the devil is in the details, it's how and when they are implemented, and while the first one felt very organic, the second one felt less so, and the quick succession of the two exasperated the issue, we had several chapters on the road to the academy, yet the moment he entered the academy, we skipped it, but i digress, it's not my intention to be difficult, but i find my self quite obsessed with this novel , i been enjoying it, and can't wait for more chapters.

Sol

I think the transition between the last arc and the start of this one has been rough. The attack on Three Meadows and the fallout were the emotional climax of the first arc. The second arc was just a bit aimless, corralling his leaving Ribenne and first steps into the academy. I suppose the storm was the climax, but then we barely get a sniff at the Academy and new characters before the story advances 4 years. I do not understand the decision not to really explore the Academy, clearly inspired by the University in Name of the Wind, at all before a time skip. I think the issue here is that the story is being paced off the basis of the advancements in the magic system Arien makes rather than Arien himself. Heck the chapter titles are often just reflective of whatever new skill he uses or threshold he reaches. Put another way, the story is overly focused on getting Arien's magic to a point where he can use it to affect the world. As a result Arien has seemed extraordinarily passive and reactive since arriving in Wayhold. It's a disappointing downshift for a lead character who has honestly had precious little to do in this story so far. The side characters have been nicely done, but we move on from them so quickly that they're rather unfulfilling. Arien needs to be more than a skipping stone through time grinding at his skills or this is all just an overwrought prologue with some rather shallow world building. I think you can take your time with this part and develop the characters and world more or condense it to get to the story you want to tell, but hovering between them is tough. Lastly, gotta say, I find the continued use of AI art for the chapters and characters rather off-putting and should not be necessary if the writing is sufficiently descriptive.

Griffus

Can you replace a lower tier skill with a higher tier skill while keeping the levels or most of them? I imagine Arien will get a storm affinity at some point to have air lightning and water in one skil.

Silver Beard

I am a little curious about the 3 plus others, beyond Will that he helping to train. What do they really know...and how loyal they might be to what's coming.

Froyo Baggins

Agreed, except for the AI art. It's better than no art. Not everyone can afford commissions.

mt

Huh? Why so aggressive? You good? And why that students should be the only ones to have rare affinities? I suppose it’s a matter of talent and luck which affinities you discover, so seeing best of our class without at at least one surprised me

Sol

Disagree. AI 'art' steals from the hard work of real artists. We readers all have imaginations. He can paint pictures in them with descriptive writing or commission an artist if/when he can afford to. Heck, if the story continues growing in popularity you'll get fanart for free. Would actually say this work lacks a great deal of descriptive writing when it comes to its characters, we typically get one description when the character appears and then little thereafter, so it would be a boon to the story as well. It both adds to character development and building out the setting.

Xander

Thank you for the chapter!