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You have entered a special location (Rank: Rare) — The Tower. While inside, you gain: +15 Perception, +15 Intellect, +15 Vitality.

So the upperclassmen had been telling the truth. Arien felt the additional Attributes immediately. Colors seemed slightly brighter, sounds clearer, and his body felt far more energetic. Several students actually staggered from the change.

Supposedly, that was one reason students below fifth year were forbidden from entering the Tower. At lower levels, such a sudden increase could be dangerous. Arien, however, felt wonderful. His own Attributes were already high enough that the difference was noticeable without becoming overwhelming.

They continued several minutes later, once everyone had adjusted. Several older students passed them on the way, offering words of encouragement.

Inside, the Tower looked surprisingly similar to the rest of the Palace, with granite arches, carved ceilings, and murals depicting Wyndor’s history and the Radiant Pantheon. The only obvious difference was how empty the corridors seemed.

They climbed to the second floor and found their classroom with the door already open. They entered hesitantly, but the Master had not arrived yet.

Everyone quickly began claiming desks, most fighting for seats in the front row. As usual, Arien settled all the way in the back. The classroom itself was not particularly different from any of the others. The only unusual feature was the empty wall at the far end of the room, preceded by a large stretch of unused floor space. 

Then an elderly man walked in. His Academy robes were clean but badly wrinkled, as though he had pulled them from a pile that morning. Wild grey hair surrounded his head, his eyes were slightly bloodshot, and his cheeks were flushed.

Arien recognized him immediately.

Vizimir Grond.

Besides the Rector, he was the only Seventh-Circle Mage at the Academy. Rumors about him were everywhere. Depending on whom you asked, he was insane, a genius, only pretending to be scatterbrained, or the worst teacher in the entire Academy.

What everyone agreed on was that he was extraordinarily powerful, well over a hundred years old, and apparently incapable of arriving on time. Pori claimed he had taught her grandfather.

“Put away your textbooks and worksheets. You won’t need them in my class,” Vizimir said, looking over the room.

Arien picked up Advanced Mana Manipulation Secrets: The Archmage’s Path by Finrey Goldtroy and dropped it into his bag.

“Completely, Master?” Reyna asked. As usual, she had assumed the role of class representative, especially during lessons with Masters who intimidated everyone else.

“Completely. Better yet, throw them away or use them as kindling.”

"Uh... then why did Master recommend we buy them?"

“The Academy requires every course to have a textbook. I chose that one because the title matched the subject.” Vizimir waved dismissively. “I knew Finrey. That idiot couldn’t teach a dog to fetch, much less turn someone into an Archmage.”

He walked toward the empty wall and pressed something between two stone blocks. The room went dark. Arien glanced toward the windows, where sunlight was still streaming through the glass. A grinding sound came from somewhere beneath the floor, followed by a brief flash of blue light. When his eyes adjusted, the walls and ceiling were glowing faintly, and the wall behind Vizimir had moved several meters farther away.

“Much better. Move your chairs to the other side of the desks. I’ll teach from here.”

Furniture scraped across the floor as everyone rearranged themselves.

Arien stared at his new position.

Wonderful. Front row.

“Good,” Vizimir said while several students were still moving their chairs. “Let’s begin. I’m afraid most of you won’t get much out of these classes, but that’s hardly my fault. You’ve spent years being lazy, and I have to work with what I’ve been given.”

He pointed directly at Arien. “You. Show me your Basic Five. Levitation.”

The Basic Five? They had learned those spells during their first year.

“Well? Are you deaf? Or stupid? Levitation!”

Arien looked around, trying to figure out what he was supposed to levitate.

A pen flew toward Arien before he could ask. He barely caught it before it hit him in the face.

Maybe Vizimir really was a little crazy.

Fortunately, Levitation was one of Arien's favorite aspectless spells, and he had practiced it often over the years, dreaming that one day he might reach the level where he could levitate himself, a feat that was supposedly possible.

He raised the pen to eye level and looked questioningly at the Master.

"Disruption!"

Arien hesitated. The pen was a basic artifact. Using Disruption on an artifact was considerably harder than dismantling an ordinary spell matrix, but Vizimir merely waited.

Arien focused on the pen and ignored everything else.

The artifact pulsed with internal magic, thousands of tiny connections packed into an object barely longer than his hand. Arien had always admired the precision required to build artifacts, even if Introduction to Crafting had convinced him that he lacked the patience to make them himself.

Destroying one was considerably easier.

He released a small amount of mana and destabilized the connections he could sense. Three seconds later, the pen broke apart into dozens of fragments that remained suspended in the air.

“Fusion, Master?” Arien asked.

Vizimir smiled and nodded.

Of course.

Fusion reversed what Disruption had done, but Arien rarely practiced it outside mandatory lessons. He began reconnecting the severed structures one by one, and roughly ten seconds later the pen floated before him in a single piece again.

Its magical functions were gone. Vizimir’s expression made it clear he had noticed.

“Transmutation. Three primary colors.”

The pen turned yellow, blue, and red before returning to its original color.

“Rainbow colors. Faster.”

Arien obeyed.

“Shield. The pen.”

He had expected that one.

Shield itself was simple when cast around the mage using it. Anchoring the spell to another object was considerably harder, and Arien had never managed it successfully during their earlier classes. 

His Mana Manipulation had advanced enormously since then. Magic Explorer also granted him far greater control over magic.

He wrapped mana around the pen, slowly constructing the barrier while it trembled and threatened to collapse. His temples began to ache, but eventually he managed to stabilize the final connection.

A smile spread across his face.

Then a thin thread of foreign mana touched the Shield. The entire structure shattered.

“Pathetic,” Vizimir said.

Arien’s smile disappeared.

“Improve your Shield and Fusion before the next lesson. If I don’t see progress, you’re out of my class for a month.”

Arien nodded and sank into his chair while Vizimir moved on to the next student. Four classes a week with this man suddenly sounded far less appealing.

For the remainder of the lesson, Vizimir tested the same five spells again and again.

“Levitation. Disruption. Fusion. Transmutation. Shield.”

Arien had still performed better than most. Eight students, including Matt and Leli, were ordered to leave and return the following week ‘when they stopped disgracing the title of mage.’ Gilly broke down near the end of her test and was dismissed as well.

By the time Madri finished, several students had tears in their eyes.

Vizimir appeared completely unconcerned.

"Levitation. Disruption. Fusion. Transmutation. Shield."

The cycle continued for over an hour.

Finally, after Madri collapsed into her chair following a failed attempt to place a Shield around the pen, the Master returned to the center of the open space before them and glared at the class from beneath his bushy eyebrows.

“I won’t pretend this is unexpected,” he said, looking across the class. “You’re a bunch of lazy little wretches unworthy of the title of mage. You can’t even cast the most basic spells properly. With foundations like these, you’ll stall at the Fourth Circle and wonder why anything difficult falls apart in your hands.”

He folded his hands behind his back.

“I expect improvement the day after tomorrow. Anyone who cannot perform the Basic Five to my satisfaction by the end of the semester needn’t bother showing up for my exam.”

He turned toward the door.

“Goodbye.”

The whole group gathered that evening even though nobody had called a meeting. Everyone was so exhausted after the first day that, looking for company, they gradually drifted toward their usual gathering place: Arien’s room.

Pori sat on the sofa with Gilly curled against her, alongside Mel and Madri. Reyna occupied Arien’s armchair, lost in thought as usual, while Matt sat cross-legged against the wall with his jaw clenched. Arien had ended up on his bed between Sebastian and Leli, who was gripping his arm tightly.

For nearly ten minutes, nobody spoke.

"Rey," Gilly finally said, wiping her teary eyes with her sleeve. "Isn't there some way to change teachers?"

"No," Reyna replied after a long pause, looking around the room as though she had just awakened from a dream. "Students don't have any influence over who teaches their subjects. Besides, he's a Master, not some assistant."

"But how can they allow someone like that to teach us?" Leli protested. "He's obviously insane."

"I know it wasn't an easy experience," Reyna admitted. "I'm dreading the next lesson myself. But Vizimir is known for his brutal methods, especially at the beginning. It's his way of motivating students to learn. Supposedly it gets a little better later."

"That's supposed to be motivation?" Matt growled. "Throwing me out of class and banning me from attending the next one?"

"I'm not defending him, Matt. I'm just telling you how it is."

"Easy for you to say. He didn't throw you out."

"That's true. He didn't," Reyna answered in an oddly calm voice.

"I wonder why? Surely it has nothing to do with your family, right?"

Arien looked at Matt in surprise. The boy was clearly looking for a fight, but why was he picking one with Reyna of all people?

"Matt, that's unfair. He threw out other people besides you. It's not Reyna's fault," Pori said.

"Of course. It's never Reyna's fault. We always do everything she tells us to, but she couldn't warn us that Vizimir is obsessed with the Basic Five. Miss Know-It-All, whose Basic Five just happened to be the best in the entire class."

"I'm not all-knowing, and lately I've had other things on my mind besides researching the preferences of Masters," the girl replied sharply. “Nobody was stopping you from practicing basic mana techniques instead of waving a sword around like an idiot.”

Matt stared at her for several seconds, furious, then stood and left without another word, slamming the door behind him.

Arien looked toward Reyna. Arguments happened occasionally, but nothing like this. Especially not within a group she had spent years holding together.

Sebastian stood from the bed. “I’ll go after him before he does something stupid.”

“I’ll come with you,” Gilly said, wiping her eyes.

The two of them left, and the room fell quiet again.

“Does anyone have any ideas for how we’re supposed to survive Vizimir without killing each other?” Arien asked.

“I’m afraid practice is the only answer,” Pori replied. “But not tonight. I’m exhausted. If you'll excuse me, I think I'm going to bed."

Mel immediately agreed, and Madri silently followed them out.

Soon only Arien, Reyna, and Leli remained.

Leli shifted nervously, watching the departing girls. "Rey, are we going?" she asked uncertainly.

"No. I'm comfortable here. I'll stay a little longer," Reyna replied, settling more comfortably into his armchair. "Leli, you'd better go do some practicing."

“You’re right. I’ll go practice.” Leli reluctantly released Arien’s arm.

Whew.

He rolled his shoulder, trying to get some feeling back into it. She had been holding on far harder than he realized.

They sat in silence as the minutes passed, and Arien began to worry that their entire group might fall apart because of their new Master. Normally, they helped and supported one another in situations like this.

What had changed?

“Why didn’t you stop it?” Arien finally asked.

“Why didn’t you?”

“Because I can’t.” He shrugged. “I’m not good at that. Half the time I don’t know what to say. You do.”

Reyna sighed. “The next few years are going to be different, Arien. The gaps between people will keep growing. Some will find better teachers, better training groups, different priorities. We can’t keep pretending nothing will change.”

“You knew about Vizimir, didn’t you?”

“Yes.”

He stared at her.

“It wasn’t secret information. Anyone could’ve asked older students. Leli knew. Pori, Mel, and Sebastian knew too, and it still didn’t save them from today.”

“What?”

“Arien, for the gods’ sake. Sometimes I genuinely wonder how you can be this naive. Or do you maybe have some trait that makes you cling so desperately to your imaginary world?"

He said nothing.

What bothered him was that she wasn’t entirely wrong. He had known the Academy would become more competitive as they grew older, but knowing it in theory was different from watching Matt walk out furious while half their friends quietly followed.

He liked what they had built over the last four years. He didn’t want it to disappear simply because they had entered fifth year.

“I’m sorry,” Reyna said after a moment. “I didn’t mean to be that harsh.”

“No. You’re right. I know things change.” Arien looked down at his hands. “I just liked spending time with all of you.”

“We’re not suddenly going to stop seeing each other.” She shifted in the armchair. “Maybe less often. Some people will find different friends or start spending more time with partners. That’s normal. But four years together don’t disappear because our schedules change.”

Arien looked at her.

“What?”

“Nothing. It’s just the first time I’ve heard you say something like that. You almost sound like a human being.”

He laughed and caught the pillow she threw at him with Levitation.

A moment later, another stream of mana latched onto it.

Arien looked toward Reyna. She was staring intently at the pillow with one hand extended.

He smiled and tightened his control.

Apparently they were training after all.

When Reyna finally left his room half an hour later, Arien was drenched in sweat and his head was pounding.

But a triumphant smile refused to leave his face.

The girl had failed to take the pillow back.

Hi! I don’t usually ask for things like this, but unfortunately, some of the things I’d heard about what can happen once a story gets a bit more visible turned out to be true.

If you’re enjoying EoN and want to help it keep growing, please consider leaving an honest review on Royal Road. Reviews have a pretty big impact on the rankings, and having more genuine ratings and reviews also makes it much harder for unpleasant tactics to push the story down.

No pressure, of course. Just reading and supporting EoN here already means a lot to me. And if you do decide to help, I’ll try to find some way to properly thank you all for it.

On a more positive note, I managed to write three chapters over the weekend, so there’s a chance I’ll be able to maintain, or even grow, my backlog. If that keeps up, I may be able to increase the number of advance chapters available at the same price. :)

Comments

David Burchfield

Yup, when you hit rising stars you start getting some really harsh reviews. I am convinced there is some sort of group out there (which may or may not include bots) that just tries to tear down new entries. The only defense is having a large enough reader base doing their own reviews to counter balance things. I have seen it happen dozens of times sorry to see you going through it too.

dragonsFire

Thanks for the chapter. What exactly has happened/are you afraid will happen with royal road?

Nick Pincus

I kind of wonder how much these students on the whole are learning the "test" vs really learning the underlying material. That whole phonomnana is very common in sat tests with rich families and the fact that all the rich kids knew to study the 5 basics made me think about this question.

Valter Anunciação

I don't think you want honest reviews . All it will do is tank your score . Some very obvious things are being ignored and some huge plot holes are being brewed for no reason other than the mc is being stubborn . All you'd get at this point is 1s and 2s . Maybe 3s if you're lucky.

Halfcrzy

Was a bit of a gloomy chapter ha. But okay, you need some RR review love, suppose we can do that.

Dkoptes

So author PvP is actually real, huh?

Emissary of Nothingness

I thought people reading this far were generally enjoying the story, but of course, I could be wrong. Nobody has mentioned any "huge plot holes" to me before, so now I'm both confused and intrigued.

Zero

The thing is while what she is saying is probably true. She knowingly made the group fracture in an abrupt way causing unnecessary friction. Yea this was gonna happen but why make it in a way that causes resentment. Why not let it happen by itself. Sure all she did was stop holding them together but she did it in a way that implies ”I don’t need you anymore so bye” while she could have stayed on friendly terms with most of them. There is the argument that she is so high above them that it doesn’t matter but still makes sense to keep what your built even if it is a hallow shell of what it was.

Emissary of Nothingness

In my book, the word "grind" has some pretty strong connotations. Today's lesson is just an introduction, though. :) But there will be some lighter moments along the way.

Emissary of Nothingness

From what I've learned from talking to other authors, unfortunately, they're not bots. :(

Valter Anunciação

You can enjoy things while still being critical and objective. I'm not hate reading but things like the Mc keeping the storm affinity hidden or not taking the death affinity are obvious wrong choices that anyone who's read fantasy can see and the Mc has no reason to make those choices. These aren't even the worst offenders.

VISHV POWER

Hi ,enjoying book. Just a question if everyone has to enter arena once in two weeks. Won't it be unfair for people who are not combat oriented example enchanters ? They would loose points and be pushed to either buy them or fail classes. I feel there should be a opt in that allows people who are not interested in combat to avoid the funnel

Snooze Bear

Might also be people who have tried to get on RS that failed and then lash out on those who do manage to get there.

Red Potato

I feel like that this chapter really cemented that it feels like we missed so much with that 4 year time gap. The 5 being such a basic thing that we didn’t get to learn with the MC and it doesn’t feel the same that their friends group is breaking up as we didn’t get to see the bonding. The only other character really written up is Reyna and everyone else feels like they are just there.

Emissary of Nothingness

Oh, thankfully RS is long behind me now, and the moderators managed to remove some of the ratings left by confirmed bots. Now it's more about Best Ongoing. I'm still seeing incredible growth in readership anyway, so I really can't complain. I just never believed that author PvP was actually a thing until now. But I'll survive. Book 3 is coming along nicely. :)

dxpt12

Thanks for the chapter! For some reason Reyna's actions rubbed me the wrong way. Even if she is right in that the gap will widen, not giving the others a heads up while practicing herself feels like she is treating the others as disposable. Which to be fair might be the case given she does not consider them friends given her internal thoughts/monologue. I guess its just annoying watching the MC invest in what looks like a one sided relationship. But then again they are kids and we've all had our fair share of teenage drama. As for the reviews, sure I will leave one after work today. I've heard about what you are saying from other authors I support on patreon. Trying to put others down and hating without even reading the story seems so silly to me given that this is a free webnovel.

Emissary of Nothingness

Yeah, it's unfair to them. On the other hand, they tend to get better exam results, so it evens things out a bit.

David Burchfield

Ahh best ongoing that makes sense... unfortunately. Good to at least know that bots aren't a big problem.

Blackjack

Unfortunately, I'm going to have to admit I'm guilty of this as well. There are a few patreons that I have followed where I wasnt enthusiast of the story, but it was good enough that I wanted to know what happens or perhaps, I was waiting for the story to get to a point that I was excited about. Maybe I was hoping the story would improve at some point. Ive had to work hard to limit myself and stop reading stories I dont truly enjoy. As for this novel, while i definitely have reservations, I wouldnt characterize it as hatred or dislike. Tbh, I think my hesitation is the tone of the story, and progression. I imagine this series will be long and Arien is alot of growing to do, but his naivety is becoming a character flaw at this point. Hes not approaching life in the seriousness i feel it deserves, what with nobles, and factions and the people he associates it. Its just not naive, its arrogant. Im honestly always surprised regarding readers dislike for MCs hiding advantages they have. Im not one of them. He needs to keep lightening a secret for a long time. However, i will criticize Arien as for someone from earth, he really isnt utilizing his advantages to pursue alternative or unique forms of magic. Time? Space? Void? I know someone mentioned Death earlier. I feel like, given Arien' trait, he should be not pursuing just more aspects, but more rarer and unique forms. Things people dont see often and wont have knowledge to defend against. Im also a bit bewildered as not only has Arien reached level 25 and obtained his second mage class, he's also uniquely positioned to have started with a mage class which is apparently unheard of, and yet it doesnt seem like Arien is more advanced or further along than other students his age.

David Burchfield

Interesting, Reyna is a character I really like (not always what she does but just her place in the story and portrayal as a whole). She has major faults, strengths, complex motivations. I am really happy to see a character that fits a lot of common tropes being given a more complex and nuanced implementation (at least that is my read on it so far).

dxpt12

I dont dislike Reyna as a character. I think the book benefits from having someone like her in it. There are several books I've read where I get annoyed by characters but still think the book is better off for having them. I feel the same about Reyna. I dislike her personality the way it is right now but I like her as a character in a book that I'm reading because I think she makes the story better. Its hard to put my thoughts into words :)

PJ

Thanks for the chapter !

Emissary of Nothingness

I understand, and I appreciate your comment. To be honest, I want Arien to have his flaws too. But more importantly, I want readers to see him grow, and I don't just mean his Status, but his growth as a character. I want him to start taking more responsibility, become less naive, and slowly learn to take control of his own fate instead of just being carried along by it. I hope some of these things will gradually start to show in this arc. Plus, I've always planned for this to be a long journey, with each arc adding something new, either to the world or to the characters.

WickedlyDesigned

I don't understand Reyna here: it wouldn't have cost her anything to share Vizimir's preferences, and it would have reinforced the others' trust in her, even if it's only a week or so in advance. And given how high the guy's standards seem to be, it wouldn't have allowed the others to become that much more serious threats in the competition. Additionally, I'm starting to seriously doubt the magic system's validity: these are supposed to be foundational spells, and as such well below the line where even an average student should struggle with them. I get that most stepped over them, but they have system skills at rather significant levels. Multiple ones that affect and benefit casting. Where is their effect? Where are the tangible advantages they provide? A second advancement bonus for life mana was enough to allow the casual creation of what effectively is a healing shield around multiple people, moving and fighting. On the other hand, a second advancement in mana manipulation is, apparently, not enough to properly anchor a shield around a stationary pen. And that simply does not seem comparable. What it gives instead is a feeling, that advancement is fully and completely story dependent, and all the students are at a level of competency that best benefits the current arc and not what would seem logical given what has been shown/told to us previously. And this is not the first time I have felt this. I am not asking for spoilers, but I would very much like to get some reassurance that you have an explicitly written down table - or at least detailed notes - what different archetypes should be capable of at specific points of their advancements, very much including the variance that different rarities of classes, different stats and different skill levels cause. Because Arien is coming up on a level that he was told was what average mages - supposedly competent and valuable members of society and the army - can generally reach in their lives. While still in school. Unable to perform basic tasks. And that seems very much out of line with the expectations we have for his levels and skill levels. Add in that his stats - which should directly benefit his abilities - are significantly higher than those of his classmates, due to the 2 traits he has, and the discrepancy between his shown and expected abilities grows significantly further. And as far as the expectations go, do please consider a direct comparison of archers and mages, given the litRPG setting: it should be significantly easier to train a simple, competent longbowman compared to a mage. It would take effort - dedicated strength training from an early age, lots of practice, but it should be manageable in scale - the Welsh did it without the advantage of skills, and did it really well, for example. But given the existence of skills and stats, I would expect a level 25 longbowman to significantly outperform a historical Welsh one. Even at a conservative estimate, I would put the standards at 300 pound warbows and 8 shots every 10 seconds (the values I'm using for the historical longbowmen are 200 pound bows and 6 shots every 10 seconds - this is based on what I've been taught years ago, so I'm open to being corrected, but as a ballpark that should be fine). That means standard plate armor is not enough (isn't even close to being enough) against their arrows. And that's the standard that a mage has to exceed in order for their higher training costs to be worth it. Which, as we have currently been shown, should mean at least 4th circle spells. Maybe 5th, if the growth of effective spell power keeps being as anemic as it was between 1st and 3rd circle. And given that expectation, Arien's and the other students' current lack of ability does not make much sense. I am still perfectly willing to believe that everything fits together, we just lack the necessary data to see it, but for that I need you to clearly state that yes, you did do the math, you did path out the different advancement options, did the comparisons and feasibility checks, and behind the visible story you have some kind of master document that you adhere to, and you aren't just working off of vague ideas and expectations.

Valter Anunciação

It's not just the Mc. The noble supposedly back staby polically shrewd character just showed her allies she can't be trusted and won't warn them when harm is coming. She just showed all the allies she spent 5 years cultivating she will not help them, she won't give them a simple warning, she won't help the group. This should have her socially ostracized and completely ruin her reputation with any social group. But Mc just let's it slide because he wasn't the one getting screwed. It's an idiotic plot hole. And like these there are tons. Not to mention this professor character feels like a poorly copied xvim.

Emissary of Nothingness

Hey, one of the readers already asked in an earlier chapter what to expect from mages of different Circles, and I'm currently working on putting something together for you guys. I do have a well-established magic system, along with a whole set of rules and safeguards to prevent the power scaling from getting out of hand later on. As for the lessons, the other classes that were lucky enough not to end up with Vizimir have a somewhat different curriculum. And without spoiling anything, think of it like sports. You have ordinary people who can kick a ball in a straight line, and then you have professional athletes who can do incredible things with that exact same ball.

Akkido

I kinda love this new master tbh. Showing right away how much they still have to grow.

Yozora

i liked this new teacher

Ivan

I'm really baffled by how lazy and naive the mc is. Like his whole thing is magic and he is too lazy to want to build a magic artefact and doesn't even go around to collect information about his classes. I'm already starting to dislike him, he really is settling for mediocrity , I dont see any drive in him. Other than that I really enjoy the story - will leave a positive review on RR.

Caleb Reusser

So Reyna seems to control the groups schedule and she did nothing to ensure that they refreshed themselves on the basic five? Yeah it definitely feels like she set the group up for failure.

UMCDaEMON pp

What is with you people that like murder hobo, revenge fantasy shit with characters with no depth or forethought. Maybe she knew that lessons are only going to get much harder and carrying/helping so many people isn't going to be best for HER, like the selfish noble she has been taught/forced to be. Maybe in a few months we could see regretted it and we see some character development. Or she has feelings for Arien and wanted more time with him. Or she is just tired of being the spider in the web she has been taught to be and said fuck it. It's not a plot hole until the story is finished. People and therefore characters arn't one dimensional. Edit: Blackjack He doesn't have the spell casting skill thing that ALL other people take, making spell casting extremely hard for him NOW but wont limit him later. Did you even read the story or just skim it?

Valter Anunciação

Because it's idiotic action. And no you don't need the end of the novel to see a plot hole coming. It's still stupid from every perspective. She just ruined her public image for no gain. If she's tired of acting like a noble she was just a massive asshole for no reason, if she wants to keep being politically shrewd she just ruined her public persona. It's stupid no matter how you interpret it.

Emissary of Nothingness

Reyna had her reasons, but Pori, Mel, Leli, and Sebastian knew about it too. And yet poor Reyna is the only one getting all the flak. :(

Floris v

Apparently in opposition to some of the other readers (seeing their comments), I'm thoroughly enjoying the story. Sure, there are some minor details I'd perhaps have done differently, but overall it's one of the stories I most anxiously await an update from, every day (well except for the weekend, sadly). I love how Arien is holding back in multiple ways, both restricting himself with not taking spellcasting, but also hiding his levels and skills. This is a dangerous world. Sure, in a story with infinite plot armor he'd already excell at everything and miraciously escape assassination attempts and grow even stronger – but this is not that story. He is a loner, as in he has no political connections, no strong friends, nothing. He's a peasant. And whereas other peasants like Gregg keep his head completely down, Arien is slightly more ambitious than that. Sure, he's a tad bit lazy. But who isn't? If you want to read stories about MC's who spend every waking second of their life working grinding their ass out there, there are enough out there. But I know most people aren't like that. I ain't, for sure. What makes him likeable is that he seems like a good guy, and actually had spine. That's what draws me in – not working 24/7. Besides, being a bit lazy, or seeming that way, fits well with hiding his progress. The thing is, we as readers know he'll be an archmage. That gives him, to us, plot armor. And in a sense makes every risk he doesn't take, every time he hides something, doesn't fully go for it, seem weak. Because hey, he'd survive anyway, and become an archmage. But he doesn't know that. He doesn't know he's the main character in some novel. He'ls just a guy trying to become powerful in a very dangerous world – especially for people with no standing trying to become powerful. The smart approach is not to rush it. Anyway, maybe tomorrow I'll do a similar rant for my love of Reina and why I liked the 4 year skip. (And no, I don't think the story is perfect, but it's pretty damn good.)

dxpt12 (edited)

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2026-10-20 23:00 She is the only one getting all the flack because the dialogue made it seem like she controls the schedule and acts as a leader for the group. Pori, Mel, Leli, and Sebastian don't do that. Her POV chapters also makes it clear that she does not view the others in the group as friends. So at least for me, it is the act of stringing people along, treating the others as disposable and trying to control them yet setting them up for failure that makes me view her actions negatively. Of course this does not mean I dislike her as a character - disliking a character's actions or personality does not mean I also dislike their role in the story. I enjoy flawed characters like Reyna. In fact the more flawed they are the better - bring on the angst and drama lol But to me it is pretty obvious to see why she is the only one getting all the flak and not the others.
2026-10-19 19:10 She is the only one getting all the flack because the dialogue made it seem like she controls the schedule and acts as a leader for the group. Pori, Mel, Leli, and Sebastian don't do that. Her POV chapters also makes it clear that she does not view the others in the group as friends. So at least for me, it is the act of stringing people along, treating the others as disposable and trying to control them yet setting them up for failure that makes me view her actions negatively. Of course this does not mean I dislike her as a character - disliking a character's actions or personality does not mean I also dislike their role in the story. I enjoy flawed characters like Reyna. In fact the more flawed they are the better - bring on the angst and drama lol

She is the only one getting all the flack because the dialogue made it seem like she controls the schedule and acts as a leader for the group. Pori, Mel, Leli, and Sebastian don't do that. Her POV chapters also makes it clear that she does not view the others in the group as friends. So at least for me, it is the act of stringing people along, treating the others as disposable and trying to control them yet setting them up for failure that makes me view her actions negatively. Of course this does not mean I dislike her as a character - disliking a character's actions or personality does not mean I also dislike their role in the story. I enjoy flawed characters like Reyna. In fact the more flawed they are the better - bring on the angst and drama lol

ALEXEI

Tftc

Silver Beard

Author needs to start surfing other story sites to see who's posting their work under another name. If they manage to discourage you from writing, then you won't know they are profiting from your work.

Aaron Weingrad

I was having flashes of Mother of Learning in a good way. lol. I like when the MC grinds their foundation.

IgnisPrimus

She should honestly get more flak, not preparing or warning her friend group that she is the leader of that they need to spent a bit more time on a simple extra exercise to survive an important class is honestly extremely evil. She would be a great antagonist for the story if she is not already.

Xander

Thank you for the chapter!

D'landis of LAH

Malcontents. The same folks who never support the authors, and complain when a stofalters.

Baconwargod

At this point the only weird thing I find about the story is ariens attitude. In arc two he operated in a very savvy manner while he was 8 and all of those lessons and reservations seem to have gone out the window entirely. It’s been an issue with arc three in general Arien feels like he’s forgotten all those lessons he learned while growing up. Combined with the very odd pacing choices and time skips it has been odd the last bit. Overall been very fun just a little confused with arc threes direction

Baconwargod

Yeah…..the emotional scenes just don’t hit hard at all

UMCDaEMON pp

She didn't act like you would, because she isn't you. I'm fighting stupid here, I'm out.

D'landis of LAH

Updated my own review on Royal road since im much further along now, the original was posted around chapter 23. Most complaints are about vocabulary and speech of the kids in the story. Not sure where those folks grew up but it seems obvious that their homes growing up make them fail to realize that speech once held a much higher place in society. Before I begin to ramble about the faling of our world wide education system if like to just say, "Screw those guys!" I still love this collection.

R. Maxwell Steele (edited)

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2026-10-22 05:00 First half of this chapter appears to be ripped right out of Mother of Learning. Not verbatim but extremely close. Hopefully Nobody103 does sue for plagiarism. I'd imagine a chapter like this will produce far worse reviews than the previous chapters which all felt original. Pretty hard to leave a positive review after a chapter that feels (half) stolen.
2026-10-21 02:13

R. Maxwell Steele

Part of it comes from royal road not helping people use the right filters. For example I can't stand slice of life or OPMC. But I can easily filter out slice of life so those stories will never get a bad review from me. The OPMC I have to manually avoid to find stories that fit my weak to strong preferences. If everybody filtered for what they like, and the filters were a lot better, you'd see a lot less bad reviews.

R. Maxwell Steele

Exactly. She decided to be an ass to people who would never treat her that way.

Emissary of Nothingness

So by that logic, Rowling should be suing every author who writes an academy arc, and Tolkien should sue everyone who includes elves in their stories? Sorry, but a strict, demanding teacher isn't exactly a trademark of MoL.

R. Maxwell Steele

Four years time gap is definitely enough time for him to get lazy and lose his edge.

Blackjack

UMCDaeEMON Did you? Perhaps, i should write shorter comments, so i dont overwhelm you. Spellcasting has nothing to do with Aspect discovery. And while, yes, lacking Spellcasting has and will continue to cause problems, obviously. That doesnt change the fact that all the advantages that Arien should have, have been rendered a wash, which was my point. You would think that Arien having multiple specializations and on his second profession would add greater advantages compared to his peers, but it doesnt. Im pointing out the discrepancy in how everyone seems to react to anyone who has over 3 aspects(which Arien has like 7? 8?), how difficult getting the 3rd specialization for mana manipulation is(which Arien is approaching), how insane it was to start with Mage as a 1st profession(which Arien did at the age of 6?), and a plethora of other things, he would be far more advanced. Im questioning the state of his progression compared to his peers. Even the most recent chapter, it was pointed out in the text, that the side character that recently joined the academy, was rumored to have reached her second spec in mana manipulation, which Arien already did during the time skip. And while, this was a MINOR point I tagged on to a much larger post. Im more than welcome to disagreement and debate on any of the points I made. Provided people are respectful and not show their ass as a keyboard warrior? Food for thought.

MxVz

Still dislike Reyna…but like this story! TFTC.