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The final week of classes before the New Year celebrations and the Sword and Book Tournament was by far the easiest of the entire semester.

The Masters spent their lessons reviewing material they had already covered, assigned no new exercises for future classes, and even Vizimir announced that he had private matters to attend to, canceling their evening training sessions.

Arien decided to make use of his first free weekend in a long time.

Together with Will, he set out to visit Sari and see how she was doing. Over the past few months, it felt as though she had been writing to him less and less. Whenever he asked, she blamed endless work and a million things that needed doing around the tavern, but he was starting to worry.

Getting through the crowded streets of Wayhold was no easy task.

The New Year always brought a flood of visitors to the city, and the capital was already bursting at the seams during winter. Snow hadn't fallen yet this year, but the nights could still be bitterly cold. Of course, it was nothing compared to Three Meadows or Ribenne. Thanks to its proximity to the sea, the capital enjoyed a much milder climate.

Following behind Will, who was clearing a path through the crowd, Arien watched the people around them with interest.

They had just passed a Ten-Person Party consisting of an elf, three humans, an orc, two dwarves, and three beastfolk. It had to be a powerful group. Their equipment looked expensive even without Mana Sense, while to Arien their weapons, clothing, and armor practically overflowed with magical energy.

They weren't the first such party he'd seen that day either.

He wondered whether it had anything to do with the Supreme Priest of Sul's Blessing or whether an entire week of concerts, balls, festivals, and celebrations simply attracted anyone eager to forget the burdens of the passing year.

Eventually, they reached the address. Or at least Arien assumed they had.

The front of the building looked completely different. The porch had been renovated and furnished with tables, comfortable chairs, and burning torches, while the sign above the entrance now genuinely resembled a golden goblet with white mist curling from its rim.

What caught Arien's attention most, however, was the amount of mana everywhere, which explained why the torches produced no smoke, why the sign seemed to draw the eye, and why stepping onto the porch carried them through an invisible barrier into noticeably warmer air.

How much had Sari spent on all of this?

At least business seemed good. Every table was occupied, and a waiter hurried between them carrying an enormous tray piled high with empty mugs.

Arien recognized him almost immediately. The former bartender. The young man now wore a stylish uniform similar to those used by the servers at the Pheasant's Wing, but the acne and patchy mustache were unmistakable.

“Excuse me!” he called while rushing past.

The tray looked heavy enough that Arien doubted he could lift it himself, let alone weave through a crowd while carrying it.

He glanced at Will in confusion, he merely shrugged.

Together, they headed for the open front doors.

A wave of conversation and soft, cheerful music greeted them inside. The melody reminded Arien vaguely of festivals back in Three Meadows.

He stopped just beyond the threshold.

When Sari had mentioned renovations, he'd imagined a few new tables and perhaps better lighting. Instead, almost everything had changed.

The bar counter was the only part he recognized. The wooden partitions and booths were gone, leaving the common room much larger and more open, with tables and benches arranged for groups ranging from two people to an entire Ten. Burning torches cast a warm orange light across the room, while a massive fireplace occupied one corner. Beside it, a musician sat on a tall stool playing the local equivalent of a flute for a group lounging on sofas and armchairs near the hearth. Arien doubted anyone on Earth could produce such a complex melody with a single instrument.

Sari had even added a low mezzanine in one corner of the tavern. At that very moment, an entire Ten-Person Party was climbing the stairs toward it, and at a glance Arien guessed they were at least Silver Rank, perhaps even Gold.

“Move, Arien. You're blocking the entrance.”

Will's voice pulled him back to Erador.

"You wouldn't believe what this place used to look like," Arien said, still stunned. "And the customers. So many customers!"

Every single table was occupied.  Shaking his head, he pushed through the crowd toward the bar.

"Hello," he said to the bartender once they finally managed to reach the counter.

The older man studied him carefully. He seemed to have left both his youth and middle age far behind. Yet despite the wrinkles and gray hair at his temples, he stood perfectly straight, and the veins running along his forearms hinted at hidden strength.

A former Explorer, perhaps?

"Whatever would the young masters like?" the man asked without stopping his work, drawing beer from a barrel into a mug. "Juice? Hot chocolate? Perhaps some pumpkin pie?"

"Is Sari around? I don't see her anywhere," Arien said.

The bartender studied him thoughtfully for a moment.

"You're Arien?"

"Yes," he replied, slightly surprised. How did the bartender know his name? Sari must have warned him he might come.

"Miss Sari stepped out a while ago, but she should be back soon. So then, juice?"

"Juice for my friend. Wine for me."

"I'm afraid we do not serve alcohol to anyone under sixteen years of age. I recommend the juice."

Arien stared at him, baffled. What kind of strange policy was that? He could understand it in the Port, where they might want to keep younger students from drinking too heavily, but in a regular tavern?

Legally, he'd been an adult since turning ten and losing the Child trait. True, Wyndor's laws required sixteen years of age to marry or enlist in the army, but nobody usually cared how old you were when ordering alcohol.

The bartender, however, was looking at him with the sort of expression that made it clear there was no room for negotiation.

"Fine. Juice."

"Excellent." The man smiled. "I recommend the apple and pear blend. Very good for strengthening one's resistance during winter."

"Sure."

"Coming right up. That'll be four silvers."

"How much?!" Arien exclaimed, almost shouting.

And why did he have to pay? Wasn't this his sister's tavern?

A quiet chuckle sounded beside him as Will tossed four silver coins onto the counter. They vanished in a single swift motion of the bartender's hand.

"Arien, I think you're supposed to support your sister's business," Will said.

"Four silvers? That's robbery! Besides, look around. She doesn't exactly seem to be struggling for money."

"And how much do you think it costs to maintain all of this?"

"Fine, fine," Arien grumbled. "But I'm getting myself some kind of discount card."

"I'm afraid discount cards are only available to Silver-Rank patrons and above," the bartender interrupted while handing them tall glasses of juice. He'd even decorated them with greenery and slices of peeled pear. That was probably where the extra silver had gone. 

Well, Will's silver.

Still, after the first sip, Arien had to admit it was quite good.

“Guess who!”

Hands landed on Arien's shoulders before he could turn. He jerked away on instinct, spilling half his juice across the counter.

“Sari! How many times have I told you I hate that?” he growled, grabbing the cloth the bartender immediately offered him.

“I thought you were some mighty warrior who's always aware of his surroundings. You train enough, supposedly.”

Laughing, she wrapped him in a hug before pulling back to look at him properly.

“You've lost weight. And you don't look particularly healthy. Will, are you making sure he eats properly?”

"He never had problems with that before," Will replied. "But lately he's been practicing magic even during meals."

"Arien!"

"What? I told you the fifth year was madness. Besides, look at yourself. I don't remember those dark circles under your eyes last time."

Though she looked happy, Sari's face seemed thinner than before.

"Miss Sari truly works too much," the bartender unexpectedly agreed. "She insists on handling every matter herself."

"Ben! I told you, I feel perfectly fine!" she protested. "Oh, right. This traitor is Ben Markson, my right-hand man. Ben, this is my brother, Arien."

"Yes, we've already met the young master," Ben said. "He tried to buy alcohol."

"And I couldn't! Is this how you treat customers, Sari? Do you have so much money that you can afford to deny a thirsty traveler a drink?"

"Come on, boys. Let's sit by the fireplace. My legs are killing me after all the running around today."

She led them toward the sofas near the hearth. Every seat was occupied. Sari simply approached one of the couches tucked away in a quieter corner, greeted the two men sitting there, and whispered something into one of their ears.

The man looked around the room in disbelief before immediately standing up, taking his companion with him while thanking Sari on the way out.

"What did you tell him?" Arien asked as he settled comfortably into the seat.

She laughed. "That two beautiful women sitting at the bar have been staring at them for the last half hour and would probably be delighted if someone bought them a drink." Arien followed the departing men's path and saw them already chatting with two rather attractive women, each wearing a long dagger at her hip.

"Incredible," he commented. Then he looked around once more. “And Sari... I'm impressed. At first, I honestly thought we'd come to the wrong address.” Arien looked around the crowded room again. “You've changed everything.”

“I'm glad you like it, even if we don't serve alcohol to minors.”

Her smile softened a little. For all the teasing, Arien could tell his approval meant something to her.

“It looks like a tavern straight out of a storybook. The porch, the music... Why does it remind me so much of the festivals back in Three Meadows?”

"Oh, you noticed? It's actually a popular melody from the eastern part of the kingdom, but I always ask musicians to play it."

"I like it too," Will said quietly. "It feels like the sort of place where I'd want to relax after a long journey and tell people about my adventures."

"Will! That's exactly the feeling I was aiming for when I designed everything. You're growing into such a charming young man. If only I were younger..."

"Ugh!" Arien cried. "Don't you have thousands of potential victims already? Leave Will alone."

"Is my little brother jealous? Don't worry, you'll always be my fav—"

"Okay, that's enough."

Arien cut her off before she could gain momentum.

"So tell me. How's business? Is today's crowd normal, or is it just because of New Year’s?"

"More because of New Year's," Sari replied. "At this hour it's usually not this crowded yet. But I'm not complaining. At first I thought I'd be pouring money into the business for the entire first year, but if things keep going like this, I might start breaking even in a few months."

"You're joking, right?" Arien asked, looking around the packed common room. Three waitresses dressed in charming uniforms reminiscent of servant attire, though admittedly a bit more daring, were barely keeping up with the flood of orders.

“I may have gone a little overboard with the renovation...” Sari admitted. “Then there were the magical devices, contracts for food and drink deliveries, advertising, musicians, compensation for breaking some of the staff's previous contracts, city taxes, wages, licenses... You have no idea how badly my hands were shaking when I did the books for the first month. But as you can see, things are happening.”

As Sari answered, Arien looked around the tavern again. The packed tables, uniformed staff, musicians, artifacts, suppliers, and contracts hadn't appeared by themselves. He'd always thought of his sister as cheerful, flirtatious, and still searching for what she wanted to do with her life.

Apparently, she'd found it.

“Compensation for broken contracts? Couldn't you just hire people who were unemployed? I thought there were plenty of youngsters in the nearby villages.”

“Maybe if I wanted to run some second-rate tavern on the edge of the city,” she replied. “I'm aiming for a higher class of clientele. For that, you need good food, good drinks, and good service.”

"So what about that former bartender who's serving people on the porch?"

"Ah, Leisy. That's a special case. I felt a bit bad firing him, and the boy has some potential. More importantly, he gives everything he's got, and that counts for something."

"Fair enough. And those customers, are they Explorers?"

"Mostly. But I'd like to attract Silver-rank parties and above. See the mezzanine?"

She pointed toward the raised platform.

"It has an artifact that prevents eavesdropping. I had no idea that sort of thing mattered so much to some people, but several Gold-ranked Tens come here regularly now to discuss important business. That was Ben's idea, actually."

"And this Ben is...?"

"He used to be an Explorer. I found him in the Three Cups tavern. The moment I saw him, I knew I wanted to hire him. Then I learned his entire family had been killed near the eastern border a few years ago, and I knew it was fate. Just don't ever ask him about it. He hates talking about it. But he's invaluable as my deputy. Though he does fuss over me a bit too much."

"Looks like you've got everything figured out, Sari," Will commented. "When I finally join a Ten, this will definitely be our home base."

"Didn't you hear?" Arien cut in. "She doesn't want children or Bronze-ranked parties in here. Maybe you should look for a tavern on the outsk—"

"Ow! What was that for?!"

He rubbed his shin while glaring at both of them.

"Will will always be welcome here," Sari declared. "I'll even give him a special Friend of the Tavern discount. You, on the other hand, I'll charge double."

"Hey! I'm your brother!" Arien protested. "Besides, I've already sent several customers your way. Did any of them show up?"

"Oh yes, thanks for that." She smiled, though she did not retract the threat of charging him double. "Actually! Weren't you two supposed to be participating in some tournament? Is that why you came today?"

"We would've come anyway. The Masters finally gave us a bit of breathing room before the end of the year," Arien explained. "But yes, we're competing. I even got you a good seat in the stands if you'd like to come."

“Oh, I'd love to!” she exclaimed.

Then she looked around at the packed tavern.

“I'd really love to...” she repeated more quietly. “I'll try to stop by, even if only for a little while. When do you fight?”

"Our first match starts in three hours."

"First match? Didn't the tournament start yesterday?"

"It did," Will answered, "but thanks to our rankings we automatically qualified for the third stage."

"I didn't even know that was possible. Are you really ranked that high?"

"Will is in the Sixth Division," Arien said. "I'm in the Seventh."

"Though the divisions are different between the two Houses," Will added modestly. "The House of the Sword starts its Arena competitions in the fourth year, so I've had more time to climb."

“I'm sure both of you are incredible,” Sari said, standing and brushing off her skirt. “I'll talk to Ben and figure something out. But if that's the case, I need to get back to work now.”

She smiled.

“Good luck!”

Two fights tomorrow! :) I also hope it'll become clearer why Will tends to fade into the background during group conversations.

Comments

Alec Johnston

Aghhhh nooooo right before the tournament curse you

Muhammad A

Thanks for the chapter!

random random

Idk why bu i didn't like the chapter. The way Sari and Arien communicate seems very odd, and you've made Sari seem like a very easy woman. First chapter since the Reyna incident with her dad that I didn't like. Also I did not get why Will fades into the background.

Ivan

Thanks for the chapter!

Adam Vaughn

Idk why either but this chapter didn’t sit right with me

K

I feel like Sari knows exactly how to needle Arien - great chapter! Thank you!

HeartHawk

Interesting. This wasn't a favorite chapter of mine, but I still liked it well enough. What about the interaction gave you the impression Sari is easy? She seems to be running a risky, if successful, business with ambitions. That doesn't strike *me* as the easy type.

Zeke

I have my own issues with the writing, but the characters not adhering to weird puritan attitudes isn't one of them. It literally doesn't matter if someone wants to sleep around, let alone someone who doesn't exist, and it has no bearing on the quality of a story.

Blackjack

I think theyre are referring too her promiscuity. I would say that a female character can be promiscuous and let's not subject her to purity culture, especially a fictional character. Does anyone recall her age?

PJ

Thanks for the chapter !

random random

Her going for Will as a joke and implying that her talking about guys she would like to bang as a recurring conversation with her younger brother is just freaking weird. And her history of sleeping around makes her seem as an easy woman. What weird puritan attitudes? What is even the point of casting her in that light? Is it supposed to make her likeable?

A.C.E.

@Zeke Nobody is arguing that someone shouldn’t be allowed to sleep around. That’s not the point. You’re free to have whatever attitude you want towards promiscuity, but pretending that it can never have an impact on a character or the story is just ridiculous. A character’s behaviour, choices and lifestyle can absolutely influence their development and how readers perceive them. You may personally see nothing wrong with promiscuity, but that doesn’t mean it’s automatically irrelevant to the quality of a story.

A.C.E.

To be fair, I share the criticism regarding Sari. There are plenty of things you’ve handled well in this story, but her character development isn’t among them. Ever since she ran away from home, I’ve struggled to find anything particularly likeable about her. In fact, I wouldn’t be especially bothered if she were written out of the story in the next chapter. There’s also something rather amusing about her refusing to let him drink alcohol on the grounds that he’s under 16. It’s quite ironic that she seems so concerned about his behaviour when she herself is hardly a positive influence. The protagonist at least seems to understand the importance of that particular rule. P.S. Her promiscuous behaviour only makes me sympathise with her even less. It’s unfortunate to see a character brought down to such a level.

A.C.E.

Second version of a comment I made; I hope that by making it less harsh, it will be better.

Emissary of Nothingness

It was Patreon's automoderation that hid your comment. As far as I'm concerned, you're free to have whatever opinion you want about Sari! ;) I don't write characters that everyone is supposed to like or everyone is supposed to hate (that would be too easy and boring ;)).

A.C.E.

That’s an excellent reply. Couldn’t agree more!

A.C.E.

@EmissaryofNothingness you ever had the chance to read Red Rising/Golden Son? It’s a fantastic book, and I think you might find some inspiration in it. Its author is, in my opinion, one of the best in the genre.

Emissary of Nothingness

I marked the first book as read nine years ago, but I never finished the whole series, and I don't really remember why.

Bereftreader

I always thought Will talks less because of his PTSD. Does he scare people with how violently he beats people in matches or is there some other reason?

Uatu

I think some of the friction some of us feel with Sari and Arien’s relationship stems from their playful teasing banter. While totally natural for two siblings to tease one another, I feel like there is a lack of warmth/compassion to it. It may be good to get a Sari pov chapter here soon to see how she actually feels about her brother because she just feels a little unreliable so far. (Which if that’s the author’s intention is totally fair in terms of character development.)

Halfcrzy

Reading this, I dont mind Sari's recent behavior, but if she also dissapeared next chapter I wouldn't care. She went from the fav sister to kind of non important. Even in the few scenes she is in, they just aren't very impactful.

Xander

Thank you for the chapter!

Daniel McConville

Little confused by the comments in this one. Sari was shown to be the 'wild child' in the previous town but only in contrast to her sister who latched onto religion super hard and became that stiff spinster nun type of character. Sari was shown to be a 'free spirit', she gives me hippie vibes honestly. She's a woman, she likes to have sex, she likes to have fun, but she still has dreams and can take things seriously. She spent a long time studying under a very shrewd old lady who took her as a protege. We learnt in a few previous chapters that the lady essentially ran many business from the shadows. She taught Sari how to get around all the male dominated industries and guilds, how to arrange permits and contracts, deal with legal things. I assume Sari is strict about the no underage drinking thing because its a legal law. She has just opened a new bar, a very popular bar. She doesn't want ANY excuse for other businesses or people to take interest and fuck with her. She is only just getting started, and has recently inherited and left a family behind her that wants all that money. Arien grumpy, old-man, miserly penny pinching are well known parts of his character. Will being Will works too. There seems to be small hints that Ben is attracted to Sari, as a person, physically, and her shrewd business acumen. I feel like the author is laying the ground work here for something like 'The Afterlife' from Cyberpunk, or a typical Adventurers Guild in any Japanese LN. Sari is slowly building a place where high ranked adventurers come for the service, food, drinks. Who will be very protective of their space and deter violence/idiots, and offering a secure place for discussion. I feel like the ground work for all this has been slowly laid over ever Sari chapter so far and aside from the dialogue maybe feeling a bit odd is the only critic of this chapter I personally have. It doesn't quite have that zing / back and forth of brother sister characters. Its sort of there but a little rough and I can't put my finger on why.

Daniel McConville

I am so confused why people are surprised about Sari's teasing here. We literally had a whole chapter back in the original city before Arien got the academy where Sari was off at a one night stand and Arien defended her and joked around with her. It was very clearly established that Sari refused to be married off, ran away with a travelling troupe and struck out on her own. She's a head strong, free spirit and does what she wants. I really don't understand why people are bothered by this at all? It's been established that many people / society don't really 'approve' but she's made it clear she doesn't give a shit, neither does Arien mostly due to his 21st century mindset, and that non judgemental attitude is one of the things they bond over and gives them a deeper relationship as brother and sister. Unlike his other sister who got very invovled in the church and bible bashes everyone as her way of handling trauma of the raid/murders. Which was also a valid and realistic response. Someone feels powerless, turns to religion, makes it their whole life / identity and get very VERY into it. It's also a very common thing that happens to people who find a new religion. So yeah super confused why so many people find her comments / teasing weird. She's an older sister, teasing Will to get at Arien is clearly something she has done often and Will takes it all in stride in very stoic Will fashion.

Daniel McConville

She's a new business owner in a big city with a lot of competition. She's being very careful to give no options for anyone to fuck with her business, her baby by bending the rules for anyone including family is how I read that. It's literally her first month, she's only just got all her permits an stuff is how I read it? She might be the 'cool older sister' the free spirit, but she's also been trained by a cunning and shrewd older lady who operated many businesses from the shadows before she died and gave all her money to Sari. Arien is clearly used to the rules being bent because he goes to an inn that is often full of Academy students. He also hangs around what like 3 or 4 noble girls. Two of them part of Great Houses. You think any inn keeper in the world is going to say no to them? Arien also looks like a noble due to his crazy Vitality so its assumed he is one in those areas/circles. That's how I read all that and felt it was established pretty well over previous chapters. Seems like maybe it needs to be spelled out a little more in this chapter to remind people? Maybe have Arien connect the dots in his head, but that kind of exposition dump seems a little ham fisted I dunno.

A. Brown

She’s been established as someone who enjoys being physical. To make her otherwise would be ret conning the character. Also maybe don’t call women easy, it’s based on the idea of women being objects and prizes. She’s promiscuous I’m sorry for you, that it makes you so uncomfortable. Maybe take a second to pull your head out of your Quran or Bible and be happy for people enjoying their lives.

Blackjack

@Daniel, I appreciate you saying it so succinctly. I understand people's opinions on the matter. A female character being promiscuous can definitely cause hesitation, especially the way male writers can create these characters.

Zeke

How much a reader personally likes or dislikes a character is irrelevant to the quality of a story, yes. The quality of the writing is what affects the quality of the story. Liking or disliking character traits is irrelevant. Things that are relevant, like believability of dialogue and consistency in characterization, would make sense to complain about, and in fact have been issues in the story thus far. But not here, specifically with Sari trying to gross our her younger brother talking about men, which is completely within her established character.

Zeke

Genuine question. Do you think the quality of character writing is determined by how much it makes you like a character?

A.C.E.

@Zeke No. Character writing and likability are two entirely different things. A character can be absolutely insufferable and still be exceptionally well-written. What matters is how they’re developed, how believable their actions are, and how well their personality fits into the narrative.

A.C.E.

@DanielMcConville I can see where you’re coming from, but I think there’s a problem when readers need to piece together so many details from previous chapters just to make sense of a character’s seemingly questionable behavior. Context matters, obviously, but so does how effectively an author communicates that context. If even you feel that the chapter might need additional clarification, perhaps the criticism isn’t entirely unfounded.