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Hello everyone, LunaWolve here!

Welcome to the draft release of Chapter 63 for y'all.

As always, a quick reminder that this chapter is still in the process of being workshopped by me and that this is simply the first-draft.

One final chapter of Thea catching up with the people, before she's back at the frontlines!

Some additional, fairly massive revelations inside of this chapter ;)

A bit of a longer one, but not massively so.

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I'm trying a new way to release the chapters now, as the Patreon re-design made the text editor even more unusable than it had already been, which is impressive. 

So you'll now find a link to a googledoc down below, instead of the entire chapter copy/pasted in here. Please let me know if this works for you!

I'm looking forward to hearing your first impressions and opinions on this chapter. \o/

I hope you will enjoy it!

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Here is the link to the chapter:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16vQxAWbLfqs10vjFAq4fbU9afJFfMWOQTHD4CPSab2w/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Ceto

Thanks for the chapter!

Dero_Dore

Another delicious chapter to end the week with, thanks!

Baldur Norddahl

Haven't read the chapter yet, but just want to say that publishing by linking to Google Docs sucks. I have had other authors do it that way and I hate it. But you could attach a EPUB and a PDF file. The author Mecanimus writing "The Calamitous Bob" does it this way and it works ok. With EPUB I get the chapter in a dedicated ebook reader app with the best reading experience.

Michael Nau

Thank you for the chapter.

Lidja

Good chapter! I like the moment when Vi almost calls Thea a Recruit and changes it at last second. Google docs works OK for me, but the reason I was reading on the app rather than just my email was for the dark mode. Hopefully they listen to creator comments and make it easier on y’all.

Eric

Can command change the order in which marines are resurrected? Or is it first in, first out? Do they get notified when one of theirs are in the revival queue?

Eric

You might want to post a read only link to the Google docs file.