animatic #2 // FILM (Patreon)

here's a second pass at the animatic. I put in a lot of the finished BGs to see what it looks like so far. and added a big more bulk to the montage middle. the timing isn't finalized with the middle yet, because i'm still waiting on my musician to become available, so once i get a rough track, i'll be able to make the timing of the middle montage a lot more precise.

But i'd love to hear your feedback with this latest update! is the writing too fast to read sometimes? (excuse my bad handwriting lol)