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Page 4 WIP (Patreon)

Published:
2019-12-06 03:48:18
Imported:
2026-06

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Some roughs for page 4 - I'm torn between one really in depth pinup page for everyone to enjoy some rubber shine, or a less detailed two panel continuation of the comic. I'm also not confident about my pose and pretty much every other aspect of the layout for this page so hopefully I can have something solid by this weekend!

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Anon

Howdy! Just wanted to say thanks for making the time and effort to share your thoughts and process like this :) I like both avenues you're exploring! Personally I love the continuation panels. I think the layout works well for the scene with the dragon looming dominantly over the freshly rubberised BimBoz. It's a nice shift of power as the Lion's smug comments result in some shiny comeuppance, leaving his new toy and the audience to wonder what may happen next ;) As for the pose, I think it works for the layout! Might just be my eyes but the alignment of the hips/knees/ankles may be a little twisted (but it's not really distracting :) ) Also the way you've done the digi-grade legs like heel-less boots is really cool (and hot ;) )

Venbred

As much as I love detailed toy orifices, I'm loving the continuation of the story more!