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Meet the Dragon page 5 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-01-15 00:20:57
Edited:
2020-06-05 21:41:29
Imported:
2026-06
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Page 5 is finally complete! enjoy some shiny squeaks with these two!

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Gnome Illustration

I love that you have just a -slight- purple tinge to her coating.

Khloe Prower

WRECK DAT SLUTTY RUBBER KITTAH!!

SaunterWing!

Disclaimer: no, I'm not expecting or wanting you to go back and "fix" anything, unless its a quick fix you think is worth the effort. This is just more of a general "things to be aware of in the future comment. Also, despite the tone of the below, your work is amazing, and you should never think I don't like it (wouldn't pay you monthly for it otherwise! ;D ) errgghhh... I love the textures on this, but it's reeeeaaaaally hard to make out because of how dark the blacks are, even with the correction mentioned above in Gnome's comment. This wasn't a problem in the last few strips because the silhouettes were really clear (or the focus was on a character with a really clear silhouette), but there's too much overlap in panels 1-2 (so shapes don't stand out), and the camera is too far pushed in (and thus closing off the shapes) panels 3-4. I think the major issue is that the rubber tone is too dark. The authorial intent is a lot easier to make out in the lineart (https://www.patreon.com/posts/wip-page-5-inks-32932942) , but becomes really hard to read when colored, which suggests to me that the black chosen is what's making it hard to read. I think addressing those going forward will make your pages a lot stronger. Hit me up in the DMs about this stuff! That being said, MMMF your texture game is on another level! These guys are on a whole other level of shiny, and I'm learning a lot from just reading this comic! Also, your anatomy and expression game is nothing to slouch at; seeing those super toned and defined shapes rub up against each other definitely has me excited for whatever comes next! Keep it up!