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So I never put one of these up last week. Let's fix that.

Futa Note Chapter 32 is already up and ready for you to read.

ASR will take a while so I can focus on planning the ongoing and do the next Amy chapter.

Amy will be out within the next two weeks.

Now, what I really wanted to bring up, as this has been pointed out several times now, is the pacing of Futa Note. No excuses other than I wanted to try something slow, but it went too far in that direction and it just kind of stuck. Things are improving in recent chapters though. The reason I bring this up, is that I'm going to go through the planning document and rework the earlier chapters. 

What does that mean? Well, nothing immediate. However, what might come about is that I take a break from the 'present' Futa Note and go back to redo the early chapters so they're more streamlined and not so stingy with the sexy times. It's the biggest story I've done so I want to do it better. Which I really haven't done. Most blocks of chapters are relatively self-contained, kind of like the MCU movies or a filler arc in anime.

So, what I think I need to work on is having character arcs, subtle or not, going on throughout the story - not just 5 chapters and done - have said characters influence the story, and explore the world more, such as giving Carmen agency in hunting up information about Seikogami, while cutting back on unnecessary padding and giving some more eroticism.

Let me know if there's anything that I should keep in mind beyond what I mentioned above. Futa Note deserves better than what I've given it thus far. 

As an aside, I'm trying my ass off to draw my own rendition of Carmen. Hopefully I can actually make a character sheet someday that isn't complete crap.

Sorry for the tangent, but I wanted to get this out there well before I try redoing old chapters.

Comments

Nikopol

It would be interesting to explore more the characters. Now it seems like after their focus arc is done, they just fade into background and are just mentioned in passing, if at all.

tosaku

That was my biggest issue when going back through it. It mostly comes down to how I structured things, which blatantly shows my inexperience