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This is a very rough and early draft detailing the idea of my erotica story, all of which are loosely based on my teacher captions.

characters:

loser mc aged 19, Louis Serre (aka lou ser) He is refered to as "Lou" for the most part. His father is french hence the surname and his mother is english. The story is set in an English speaking country closet to England. He studies gender studies/science, due to his parents seeing the course advertised and deciding it'd be a good fit for him, the teacher is in that ad and is the first time the viewer and reader is introduced to her to establish her character without them meeting just yet. For the most part he is a relitavely average guy that makes friends easily and is very confident speaking to girls. He is not "into" femdom or at least has not has an awakening yet. When he does get bullied or humiliated he notices he gets hard, and "why does this feel good" and the story is about him exploring that further. Ultimately he wants others to see him in a positive light and him being exposed for the loser he later becomes is what gets him the most worried but also the most turned on. His biggest motivation is simply getting through school with good grades, the teacher will learn about this and use this to her advantage. There is also a period where he has a crush on a girl in his class, this is used more so as motivation for him to keep submitting to the teacher seeing as he does not want to get exposed and risk his crush finding out. The apperance of Lou and his deeper personality is still undecided and is subject to change.

teacher - Mercy Payne

She is in her early 30s wavy ginger hair, green emerald eyes, usually wears a wh*te blouse, and a red skirt, with pantyhose. She carries herself with a lot of confidence but comes across as a more relaxed and friendly teacher. She is deceptively kind, there are rumours and whispers of her true nature. She is very dominant sexually by nature but is in an unhappy marriage with a husband that is not into the same kinks and fetishes shes into. She uses her position of power as a sick and twisted way of getting off on controlling others. The subject she teaches is marginalized groups, (mainly focusing on how historically underprivellaged women were as well as black people) this may potentially lead into subtle BNWO storylines later down the line. Her reputation among staff as stated is one of someone seemingly kind but incredibly confident in everything she does, ultimately if she wants something she will get it. However there are rumours about her floating about. Rumours of her sham marriage in particular make her kind persona harder to believe.

The MC reminds the teacher of her husband, both in looks and personality. She failed to break her husband so she wants to break him. The husband for the most part is rarely mentioned and is only ever really used as a device to move the plot forward, potentially a divorce later on to write him out but his existence is vital to the plot exisitng in the way that it does. She married her husband at a young ish age mainly for the money but he was never into the same kinks as she was, that is why she went down the career she did, to use it as a way to express her desire for control. There is a doakes like character within the department that suspects her, she will get "rid of the problem" and despite no one saying anything they will all know, the other teachers will silently fear her as she builds control and power within the department. Later on she will also specifically get girls in her class to lure or bully the MC as she builds a small army of mini doms.

The way their dynamic will start is with her subtly picking on him in classes and him slowly realising he likes it. I imagine that perhaps he begins to slowly awaken to his submissive side and does something big or obvious and gets caught in the act, such as sniffing her shoes and getting caught. A big "event" takes place that begins it.

The main kinks throughout the story will be: facesitting, feet, farts and later on chastity, cbt etc. It is not a BNWO story although certain chapters or elements may appear. The kinks and scenarios will only get more and more extreme as the story progresses.

Given this is a school setting there is a lot of potential for a strong supporting cast, a nurse, a janitor, the principle, a bully, a nerd, librarian, teacher of different subjects, lunch lady. I will implement them as appropriate.

The majority of the plot is played out in a big english university in a large city, this makes it possible and feesible to introduce other locations as needed.

The crush as mentioned earlier will be a tiny self insert, she will be in the same class as him and the teacher will also interact with her in order to preassure the MC more. MOST* of the story is written in Lou's POV (unless i did like a sister series from the teacher pov) a few chapter of lous pov leading up to them finally entering into this dom/sub dynamic and right before it happens I do a few chapters from the teachers pov to build suspense.

I aim to write about 30 chapters with the ending already roughly in my head. This will be a very slowburn but I hope it is a fun read and potentially slightly different or more wholesome goon material. I've never written a story like this and the most experience I have writing is through my captions.

These are very rough notes and everything here is subject to change, I've kept heavy spoilers and ideas out of this for the most part to still remain a sense of mystery and suspense. Please do give your honest feedback <3

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Femdom footslut

For this being your first story I really believe you will do great, after reading trough all the notes I really believe it will be an amazing story, well set up to feature many relatable/dream like moments. Wich is amazing and not always as easy to pull off. A cool dynamic regarding all the characters mentioned! I really look forward to seeing how it looks once finished! I will wait with any further comment on it, see how your idea forms and perhaps get a better understanding to give potential notes. For now take your time , I know you will make an amazing story!! 🖤🖤🖤