Now I'm starting to see it, are you? (Patreon)

That rush to get it done quickly. I think it's very clear, in comparison to the first few pages, these have begun to decline, not only art wise but also the way the panels read and the story itself (or maybe I'm too big a critic on myself). You let me know?

But here was a great lesson for me, that in the present, I've spent a lot more time writing the story, re-writing the story, and finalizing it before pen even get's to paper; or pen to screen. I mean the designs are being done simultaneously, BUT they're not the final product that will be put out, they're components being put in place so that the final product can be better! You'll see, for now though, let's continue with this.