Another mish mash storyboard (Patreon)

I say mish mash because you can see I used clips from the previous storyboard but added new ones, and with the new ones this storyboard becomes a lot clearer and easier to understand! So it was heading in the right direction, although, the music choice doesn't fit the theme of the project anymore, the message does, so we were half way there. And this one doesn't have as much story spoilers in it either, although that specific story outline isn't being used anymore. 

Anyway, all in all this was a great learning experience for me and really gave shape to how I've approach the trailers now and the visuals of the over all story. So what did you think of this one?