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Bel stood over the two previously  teens, her hands sparking with magic as she finished siphoning. The teen  devil was always mocked for her immaturity and short temper, but now  with the help from her little trinket, she has certainly turned the  tables on her rivals. Angela and Winifred felt the Devil’s magic pulling  at their minds… it was getting so hard to think… Winifred looked up at  Bel’s now ample bosom, a dribble of drool slipping down her chin… So  hard to think on an empty stomach.

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Joe Haley

Love the drawing, but allow me to get grammatical on you. "Previously teenage girls" reads better than "previously teens." Anything ending in -ly is an adverb and cannot modify nouns. It can, however, modify an adjective modifying a noun.