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So from the polls it seems like a majority of y’all favour a remake/do over of the series with the much requested start of the Nalu relationship/horny arc 👍🤭 I’ve already sketched out the initial draft panels of the doujin. Enjoy 🙏 and as always let me know in the comments your thoughts and critiques 😊

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Erin V123

While I’m saddened to hear that we’ll be a getting a do over instead of a continuation of Fairy Heat 3, I’m happy to hear that you are continuing this series Good luck 👍

Joshdinobarney

I felt the plot and art style is in need of an overhaul, as for certain scenes and ideas I’ll still be reusing some poses which can fit into some scenarios 👌

Erin V123

Makes sense I suppose Good luck 👍

Joshdinobarney

Which is why I made the poll to check how everyone is feeling about a remake 👍

E.C.

Looking at only the new pages so as to have a fair critique: honestly I can tell how much of your new style is showing through these pages. Though between pages 7 and 8, feels like the action went by WAY too fast lol. From panties to just straight sex. Not sure if you just picked random pages or the first few, but it just feels like an odd pacing choice as i would have thought you'd have them having some foreplay in taking off the bra and panties before the fun started

Erin V123

Understandable I look forward to seeing it 👍

Joshdinobarney

I hope to impress all of you when it’s done 🙏😊

Joshdinobarney

Oh yeah I forgot to clarify it’s random pages with some missing ones in between first as I just wanted to showcase the general flow of how their first time together may go, poses and pages are also subject to change hence why it’s all still in a sketch phase. So yea I’m jumping a few pages here and there to get a general checkpoint system going

E.C.

Ah, ok. That makes a lot more sense. I will say the one inconsistency I see is how you draw Lucy's nose on some of the pages/panels. It looks like it's super flat at times, while others are more detailed. When it's a far away shot it makes sense, but then the last page you posted she is quite close and her nose just doesn't look at detailed as in the other pages you drew her closer up. I will give Kudos to the pubic hair thickness and her detailed bra and panties. Stylized is always a nice thing to have and not many would draw pubic hair on the girls so it's a VERY nice thing to see.

Joshdinobarney

Alright noted 👍 😁 I gave them hair since it’s more natural

E.C.

Which is honestly extremely appreciated. I always love the detail you put on the little things like that.

DaisyOkk

Wow estoy muy impaciente por ver esto, la verdad si me llama mucho la atención ver cómo empezó esta pareja de enamorados a tener una relación en la que se aman al tiempo que ninguno puede quitarse las manos de encima, y siempre he querido leer un cómic detallado de cómo es la primera vez de estos dos personajes

Joshdinobarney

Hope you’ll enjoy it 🤭 can’t wait to start on it too after finishing the summer series 😂

ShiningCassette

You're really good at Lucy's expressions 👏🥹

Domi

Is it gonna be Fairy heat 4?