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Hello everyone!

I Am writing this because I noticed that the chapters with smut (of all stories) Don’t get the same support as the normal ones.

So, i want this post as a retro, do you like them or would you prefer that I sepárate it from the main story, maybe something like an individual serie.

Let me read you!

As usual, a free pic about one of my stories, dear Genna will have a wild night if I see a lot of support here!

P.S. Are interested in a discord Channel to talk more about? I would like more interaction between us.

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Josh Robbins

Have smut in it or released as companion piece. Either is fine with me.

Zack #truckerlife

I love them they add more depth to the story line and make them really good

One Of Avarice

Personally smut in stories is great. Probably dont get the same feed back cause people are either shy about commenting on it or dont care about it. Honestly write how ever you want it's your story and they have been amazing so far

Fanfiction lover

I love them they had more to the story in my opinion

John7799

I think smut has a place in storys that you write

Knightwolf91

Either way is fine, although im thinking that they so little support because of the lack of detail. The few scenes I've read with jon and lucretia in the White Dragon the smut starts then jumps to the end in the next sequence.

Knightwolf91

Also which story is this genna from

LuciDev

Love them

Kinggn

Brother, it's your creative work, write whatever you wish, but if you need feedback, sometimes the erotic part seems to dominate the narrative rather than being an extension of it.

Immortal knight

They are always well written and loveable

L

Like them

James Stark

Yeah, coming On Friday With the New episode

amac1688

within the story. i do not feel that they overpower the narrative.

The3rdNoof

I Like most of the chapters regardless if they have smut or not. But i have to admit i am not reading all storys

James Stark

Thanks For hoy comment! Which one are you reading?

BP-45Schulz

it’s chill with me. i do like when a chapter has it with less plot importance so i can skip if necessary

Kinggn

Subtle shouldn't convert into less because it's what unique about your writing which makes an interesting read, you just need to shape it in such ways that it looks like an continuation of the narrative and if you want to give half or more chapter worth of smut then use the Tarantino rubberband anology of stretching it to see how far it can stretch and just before it's snap, boom a half chapter worth of smut

The3rdNoof

Crow Lord, the Emerald King and the penitence of the Wolf

James Stark

Cool! I’m Glad you like them! Got a lot of plans for them, any suggestion or comment?

James Stark

Better integration, more organic, ok got it

Amen Doe

Honestly I prefer the smut chapters as I feel like they are your better chapters and your non-smut chapters feel like filler.

Amen Doe

Then again I only read penitent of the white wolf

James Stark

I got some drafts for something similar! A SI as Viserys I, just that i am usure about using Jon or any other character, maybe Robb, still brainstorming that one

The3rdNoof

I am looking forward to see how Harrys and Lily influance and change the story of the seven kingdoms. I am also interested to see how Rhaegar deals with Robert and how the Targaryen deal with the Daena (i dont remember if Jon/Aerys has said Rhaella his story - that he was Jon Snow - but that would be interesting if this will happen in the future.) The storys are excellent and i am waiting for the next chapters. keep up the excellent work

Shawn Grover

They are your stories, so do what you feel fits your works, but I do think making it more subtle in the more plot-heavy stuff, or just in general, would be nice. Cause i do like your stories, but at least for a few, it feels like the main point is the smut for most chapters.

McGrundy

The smut, at least in Penitence of the Wolf, always feels heavy-handed. As if the story shifts from Jon possessing his Grandfather to right the wrongs against his family into a smut story of Aerys conquering Westeros one cunt at a time.

Christopher Garcia

The smut chapters aren’t too bad in the stories I’m reading they flow naturally doesn’t seem forced in. I’m not reading all the stories so I can’t say about all of them but I don’t have an issue with them, I don’t think they need to be separated.

John Williams

I don’t mind the smut, in fact I rather like it.

Bouttefeux Pierre-yves

I don't mind the erotic parts as long as they don't take over the story. The stories are great but frustrating in the sense that we only get one chapter per week and we want more. If the smut slows down the story, it becomes even more frustrating, I think. Otherwise, thank you again for the worlds you create.