Which is the best text sample? (Patreon)

(The text in the PDF is from WINGS OF FIRE BOOK 1. I used this text to test story telling formats for comparison. I DID NOT WRITE THE SCENE USED ORIGINALLY. I DO NOT OWN THE TEXT USED!)

Look at the PDF and tell me which version you like most. Rate it based on the bottom page's info, or add more of your own thoughts too.
Please and thank you!

This is a follow up to my last post. I took a sample of text from Wings of Fire Book 1 (super early on so don't worry about spoilers or anything) and wrote it in 3 separate ways. I want to know what you guys would rate each one?

I'll attach the pdf.