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That completes this short story. I was considering adding dialogue and narration to it but really the pictures speak for themselves. Should I shake things up with a few shorter stories with less dialogue? It works for a character like Boo who doesn’t speak, and the early Boo stories that debuted in GBM magazine rarely had dialogue or a lot of narration. I like writing the characters that are chatty like Bigger Butz or Lil Big Dick because they’re fun and funny to me, but they wouldn’t work as well without the dialogue but I definitely have some characters who work without words. Anyway, just me ruminating as I try to finish the next Bigger Butz story (the writing is done, but there’s a lot of pictures to finish!).

Thanks for the listen and, as always…

Enjoy!

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QueLuv

Yummy

Anti simp

Yea we need no words just pure action , that was hot ASF

Thomas Coffin

Anything Boo does is self-explanatory!!

Victor

I love the dialogue but not having it doesn’t take anything away from

Gary Richard

I would give anything to be one of those guys at the beach.

David Haas

It would be a fantasy fulfilled to spend time with Boo at the Beach, or any of his friends. Sooo virile and masculine! 😈

Thuki

"Should I shake things up with a few shorter stories with less dialogue?" Personally I prefer the longer stories with several episodes instead of something sort with only one or two episodes. I LOVE suspense.

Belasco

It took a while for me to get the hang of writing longer stories and I like creating new characters and developing storylines. They obviously take longer to do though so I’ll probably bounce between doing long and short stories depending on the treatment that works best for the story .