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This is always an emotional moment for me.

When I started Changeling, the end game I had in mind was ‘political’ rather than the usual death of a villain. That’s because cyberpunk settings can never be fixed by killing a cog in the machine, but by altering the machine itself. The logical and narrative end was the UN chapter, but I also wanted to tie loose ends. In retrospect, I should have switched the order of things so a UN agreement signature with a coven was the end and Nestra’s triumph. I think the latest chapters missed the mark. They were not as good as I wanted them to be, and for that, I am sorry.

On the positive side, I am rewriting parts of Changeling anyway. The first book is done and will now go to copy editors for checking. There are differences in how hard the fights are, how much control Nestra has over her progress, and how the early portals interact with Threshold’s population. I am aware that the end will require a much more comprehensive level of work and I’m fine with that. It also taught me that I need to plan the endings better and it’s something I have already solved for 108, the next story.

Regardless, this is my third complete series and I’m rather proud of being someone who brings things to a close. Even though none of my stories are perfect, I believe they all have good moments. I will never thank you enough for being here with me week after week, allowing me to live the dream. I am one of the lucky few who can live from their art and this is only thanks to you and your belief that I somehow deserve cheese money for my writings. 

So what now? Now I write epilogues. I’ll admit that Calamitous and Journey left more than a few people frustrated when the fates of important characters were left unsaid, so in order to prevent that from happening here, comment on who you want to feature in those epilogues and I’ll be happy to oblige, even if it’s just one paragraph. If you have complaints, remarks, or questions you can also write them down. I will do my best to reply to everyone.

After I’m done with the epilogues, 108 will take Changeling’s spot for weekly releases after a short rework. There are still things that need to be adjusted. I will also create a dedicated tier and start working on a fifth story. I'll send a pilot within the next few months.  

Comments

TheLord999

Till the next the story ! Although we might get more changeling seeing the ending, also I’m still firmly in nestra x Camille camp !

Ryan Brudnicki

I loved changeling, the magicpunk city was an amazing setting, but i have also been really looking forward to 108, i cant wait for it!

Kevin

MOAR!!! Thank you so much for writing incredible books. I was so happy I picked Bob up on a whim thinking (what a strange name for a book, isn't the MC a woman?). Here's to our next adventure!

Uroš

I would love to see more 'Cooking with Crescent' shows here and there please. Pretty please. With a cherry on top? :)

Unwillingmainer

Nice stuff all around. Been here since Bob and really enjoyed all you've made so far. Also impressed you have managed to finish your series instead of going on forever. Been a competent, if not amazing, ending then something that never ends. Can't wait to see where 108 goes and what else you have cooking.

Sparifankerl

Looking forward to the 108. The chapters we got so far were highly promising. I liked Calamitous Bob, Journey and Changeling a lot so I’m definitely sticking around for more. And I salute your willingness to wrap stories up. Far too many authors hold off on it for too long and lose me at some point. Better to have one story wrap up and a new one start as a slow attrition of too much of the same.

Kennyevilmonkey

I remember back when I, some years ago on Royal Road, discovered a story about a silly vampire girl crazy about guns and explosions. This has been quite the Journey so far, and I am certainly looking forward to where it will go in the future.

Alex V

I would like to see the Tigress visit to a spa centre/pet grooming service, maybe from point of view of an employee 😄😄😄 I can imagine their boss urgently searching for a specialist that knows how to handle big cats, and their reaction to a Tigress😁😁😁

Robbie Mathieson

I shall miss this series. But I eagerly await what comes next.

Novels by Mecanimus

I was at the top of rising stars for WEEKS! I still remember that high.

Sam

When I read the the title for this announcement I almost had a mild heart attack. Thanks for all the good work

Novels by Mecanimus

As I always say you either finish a good story or you write long enough to become Savage Divinity.

Novels by Mecanimus

I have an idea with plenty of narrative arcs but it still needs to cook a bit.

Novels by Mecanimus

I think I must have lost hundreds of readers because the title was a turn off. It was supposed to be a joke story, but it ended up becoming my most popular story.

WickedlyDesigned

This kind of crept up on me: it's obvious in retrospect, but I have taken to taking the better stories at face value - I find them more enjoyable if I don't have speculation based expectations on what's coming. Anyway, thanks for the story, this was one of the good ones. And as for the epilogues, I'd like to see if any of the coven members recognise Shinran's space station and the race behind.

Freddy Krueger

Sad to see. I dont understand why stories like changeling and bob end like they do. To me it always feels like there is so much more to see, just from another point of view. Whit the mein char already being strong the story could take turns not possible till that point.

Sparifankerl

I hadn’t noticed that story so far. Thanks for the hint, I’ll give it a try next time I’m desperate to wast a month or three. (So probably tomorrow.)

DeadicatedReader

Awesome work! I'd love an epilogue chapter/segment just for a Cooking with Crescent watch session

Michael Joyce

Don’t burn yourself out take your time with your main plot points make sure you enjoy the story you are writing no story is ever truly complete as it’s always up to the reader in what they see in your works I love your sense of progression and the chaotic humour is perfected. Congratulations on completing another story I found nestras tale refreshing almost like we got to taste what Journey’s ending could have shown.

Lexi Star

Haven’t seen it mentioned yet but I’d love to see Helena in the epilogues at least a bit. Congrats on finishing another story! That’s never easy.

AntKiss

Oh wow I thought I saw signs of the end coming over the last few chapters and yet I'm still surprised. So many threads and ideas that I thought were bond to happen ( Nestra wondering the universe, Nestra punching her bio dad, the whole Shiran alien space station stuff, how will the male azhii reacts etc..) are left unanswered or mysteries. Gotta be honest I'm kinda disappointed, I love this series and would love to read more of Nestra journey. That said I get it, not every stories are sagas and this is a great ending point that makes sense thematically and for the main characters. Thank you for this great story

SunderGoldmane

Whhhhhaaaaaaaaaat daaaaa fuuuuuuuuqqqq?-_-???0_o??? I didnt see this coming AT ALL. Also…. HEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYLLLLLLL YES 108 is on its way!

Maurin

I feel stupid, I didn't realised it was the end of the serie, I'm a little numb right now😄🥹😮. I was expecting some kind of war or raid from Nestra's biological father for the ending If we can do some kind of wishlist, I'd like to see Nestra and her brother make piece. I'd like to know how far Nestra's politician friend she got out of jail will reach (Maybe as a future Mayor?) I'd like to know if Camille and Nestra will get together? I am a sucker for Romance and it is one aspect that I missed about this story. Nestra was coming out of her shell and she still had a bit of a social growth under her belt I think. I would like to see her as a veteran leading an operation (maybe with a Pov change from a newcomer) Some scene that shows she is now a celebrity would be funny. An episode of Cooking with Crescent with Riel I really love the setting of changeling, I feel like this serie could go on with a different protagonist maybe? I really liked the multicultural aspect of the society and the constant melting pot of influences. I can't wait to read the books 📚

grankaktus

Wait what ? Oh wow i was totally unprepared for the serie to end this soon, feel like there's so much more to tell and to explore in Nestra's universe. Devastated, Changeling was my favorite of your works (even though the 2 other were also excellent).

Xanadar

Hey, I do think you're right that this ending was very unclear. I think introducing too much star people mystery didn't help for that. On the other hand you're so far the only writer who finishes their stories in a good way. So I want to thank you for that because 2/3 great landings is already above average and with some more editing it will certainly be 3/3. Thanks for the ride on this one.

Ben Cor

I really don't see Nestra and Camille getting together. As far as I understand, Nestra is asexual. It's not a disease or anything, it's the way her brain is wired. I might be wrong though, you never know.

Max

Thanks for the ride, but to me the ending feels kinda iffy as if 20 chapters ago you decided you’re done and dont want to continue. I hope this changes with the editing, especially the introduction of the star people feels very unsatisfactory in light of the story ending at this point. Looking forward to regular 108, epilogues (Nestra x Camille), and the next story!

Manlor

It's not a person, but we never did learn more about the people who built the station, and their intentions.

Manlor

Yes I thought that we were at "going on the multiversal adventure" arc of Journey of Black and Red, heading to the Star People power level arc.

Young Youghurt

Journey's end was perfect 10/10 and Bob was 9.9/10. I am of opinion that not every single mystery must be resolved for satisfying conclusion of a story however it's aproaching end should be usualy clearly signalised. This might be your worst ending so far and yet it still stands horns and heads above any other author on RR (as far as I can remeber... oh Savage Divinity's ending was a relief Xd). I never exactly fell for the Changeling as I did for previous works. In some aspects I think it shows depletion of recuring thought constructs/patterns (tropes, themes, jokes) that were present in previous works. Some of that is unavoidable as it is part of authors DNA but freshening and rotating ideas is a must to avoid fatigue (I voted for that other story about devilkin or somesuch BTW). Changeling was a bit out of shape but fun. With 108 future looks bright.

Pedro Henrique

I would love to see A-Rank Nestra bringing her family and guild to exotic portals in diferent worlds, using her female Azshi powers to lead her "warband" to glory and riches. On that same note i would like to see the next generation of the Little People's League looking up to Nestra as a powerful and influential person like she used to look up to Shinran, maybe a contrasting shot of Sereth and Stibb's children looking at those starstruck gleam babies being in awe of Nestra while they know that their aunt is a goofball in person.

tr13ze

The end feel kinda rush but it was a good journey that you did offer us, as always. Thanks for the hard work😁

Guessed

Well, that was abrupt. I think you're right about the UN treaty being a more satisfying note to end on and this ending missing the mark, though deciding to just go with it anyway instead of fixing it sure is a choice. The adversary civilization and their "not for sex" bots was a strong hook and I had wondered if they were getting set up to be the focus of the next book after we spent a couple of chapters fleshing them out, likewise Nestra's mom's rapist not getting what's coming to him is fairly unsatisfactory though if Nestra was the one doing it that would probably necessitate another years/decades-long time skip and I do want to give you credit where it's due for not doing a time skip this time - I started reading during Bob and then at some point went and read all of Journey once it was finished, so when Bob suddenly had a huge time skip I got an immediate sinking feeling which was then immediately justified. So yeah, good job not skipping ahead in a "the author was bored of writing this so here's how it turns out" way, less-good job having it end with a low-stakes mission and a low-profile (under the circumstances) wedding - I'm very glad Stibbs got the happy ending she deserves but she's been largely a non-character since Nestra went off to rescue Sereth for her, only popping up occasionally to be pregnant and/or harassed by the media. Speaking of the previous chapter, the whole "go into hiding by transitioning" thing was SUPER weird. Maybe I just have poor reading comprehension but that seemed like such a weird sequence, like what a monumental life change just to go into hiding, which they'll probably be unhappy about forever when they could have just dyed their hair and gotten a face lift? Unless the point was that they were trans all along and it was going to show that Rebirth isn't some bigoted hillbilly organization, but compassionate people who have serious concerns about alien infiltration? Which would be an awesome way to show that, but it came off confusing instead. Plus of course they have a rich history of acting like bigoted hillbillies. On a meta level, it's very disheartening to go from 1 Bob 1 Changeling per week, to 1 Changeling per week, to fuck-all per week - I kept wondering when 112 was going to start filling the Friday slot and the answer was apparently "never" :/

Johan Persson

Thank you so much for the series. I thoroughly enjoyed every part of it, and can't wait for what's next.

Mozco

IMO, Changeling is one of the greats. My most massive gripe with this genre is how little the stories have actual meaning behind them. Changeling touches on topics including family, acceptance, the limits of honesty, and what it means to be a ‘human.’ I honestly hoped this ending happened about now, because I feel that the story continuing would see some of those topics become harder to discuss now that Nestra has gone public. I do, however, earnestly hope for a sequel story in the same setting, even if it doesn’t follow Nestra (I vote Helena). I think there's a lot of story and potential to explore. Good luck with whatever you do next! And, of course, epilogues I'd like to see: Check in with Argent Elpis and Death Bloom Riel visiting his families graves and reflecting on how the world has changed and will change Makihel meets Stibs and the nephews(?)

Jack Holden

Congratulations, it was really good. Very impressive blending of genres that felt lived in. I'll be honest though, I was kind of expecting it to continue till she had godlike power like Bob and Journey. I thought we'd see more of the larger universe and learn what the portals really are. Learn what that weird spaceship was about, fight her biological father...

SunderGoldmane

Reading the epilogues of journey made that story stick in my brain for a long while

SunderGoldmane

Multi dimensional raid of the Little People League! Show up, kill so (smaller) kaiju for locals, drop a business card and portal away.

MountainFox

Thank you for the hard work. You did great!

Morgan Redshaw

Congratulations! I really enjoyed the story, and it's also great to read one that actually ended.

Nait02

I for one enjoyed the last chapters, but I can see how reordering could improve things. One way or another I am excited for the epilogues, 108 and whatever you come up with for prologues.

Kazith

You nailed it. Sure some small changes can be made but I just appreciate all the time and efforts you put into writing amazing stories. Perhaps a chapter from Sereth’s point of view would be interesting. Showing some way that he’s being challenged.

HikinBear

Congratulations on completing another story! That’s a great event. An epilogue with Helena gets my vote. As the child who shouldn’t be, she has excellent paths for growth. BTW: the title for this announcement sucked. 😡

Michael Joyce

For an epilogue I think I would like something open ended that leaves room if you ever revisit this world be it with Nestra or someone else or multiple POVs I think some experience outside your comfort zone will help your future writing be it a sequel to this or a past work I love your writing style and am always engaged I’ll always be happy to read your works congrats again

Adspartan

Not gonna lie I was looking forward to Nestra investigating the Star People, trying to figure out what they meant by "Fortunately, reavers lack the intellectual capability to make use of their space powers beyond mobility and storage", seeing Helena grow and reach B class (would she be allowed to go to the Aszhii home ? Could she handle it ?), ... I will really miss the story :(

StarWolf

I for one complained a good bit about ending of BOB. The way Journey was tied off was better... This last chapter of Changling is better than how Bob ended... though the epilog wasn't bad - it was not the best. I was growing concerned about how a number of the last chapters - one or two felt good but the others needed other folks to help you edit, add more material and smooth things out... but glad you've learned that you need to plot your endings! Once you reach the conclusion you need to PAY your audiance! Celebrate the end of the series with a polished epilog that sends your characters off into the sunset!! Do not end with "And the battle was won! The End" NO - do yourself, the audience and most of all your characters and the hardwork the justice to end the series in a clean manner - this way you can always come back if you want to one day or not. Celebrate your audience and characters and lovelingly tuck them into a warm bed as it where. Sorry for the use of metaphor, but when you are ending the series end it on a series of high notes! What do we want to see? - I would suggest jumping into the future. The 50th Anniversary of Covan's agreement with Threashold / Earth and letting us know where everyone is at that point. Started off with a teacher briefing her class of 13-16 year olds on the past 50 years, as they have only known the deal with the Covens. From there visit at least everyone listed below and what they have been doing for the last 50 years. Sereth / Stibbs and family Nestra's Human Family: Parents, Helen, Ulysses and his family, her Aunt... Camille The Little People's guild and etc. The world in general - how is earth doing, the people, is magic strong enough that all kids are being born as gleams and not norms? Etc... Nestra's growth - fame, fortune, level and growth Take it easy - just make it smooth, loving, warm, little glimpses - but at the same time expound on the over all situation.

Lorcogoth

sad to see the story be over, but I understand your concerns. on a hopeful note, if you ever decide to revisit this universe there is a lot of potential with Sib's and Sereth's kids and how they might be useful for Human-heavenly diplomatic effort. you know send them to Heavenly royal academy due to Sereth's birthright, as a way to proof that humans can do just as well as Heavenlies. have a cool Alien aunt (or two) be forced to interfere, meet grand-father (either side of the family) etc. etc. lot's of shenanigans possible...

Owen

I want to know more about shinrans training portal lol

Sergey Kadaner

Each new story is 1000 pages shorter than the previous one 😢

PickledTink

This was... sudden is all I can say. It feels very cut short. At least you left it open to maybe continuing later.

Halfcrzy

I agree. So many hooks left unfinished. The family was essentially dropped~ brother/father/auntie. The training ground, mazinhwa recovery, demon father, earth future incursions, Seth's sister reunion, nestra growing more as a character instead of a food idiot. More about her other race and why they are feared, general power up to A-class. Man it was just so many. This felt like 2/3 of the story was told and the rest not. The ending bugs me so much the more I reflect on it. This feels like a 4/10 novel to me now. Wasn't even complete, but a stronger technical skill to sort of save it.

Galm_1

Yeah nah I’m not terribly satisfied with this ending either. It’s actually worse than Bob’s because I saw that ending coming. Changeling just sort of stops out of nowhere. This feels like an okay if abrupt ending to a book in a series, rather than an entire story. There’s so much here left to explore and Nestra’s arc feels like it’s missing most of it. I sincerely hope you return to this one at some point.

AbeoLogos

I'm curious about the fate of that Heavenly crafter savant lady. Last we saw her things sure didn't look great. But I could also see modest luxury and security she'd never experienced before being the outcome.

Adam Davies

Thanks so much for the adventure. I really really really really appreciate that you don’t fall into the trap of extending the story past the natural conclusion of character development. Too many serialised works would now move into nestra-explores-the-multiverse mode out of either fear of doing something different, or worries their reader base would abandon them, when actually, the neverending story is what drives disengagement. I have enjoyed this journey, and looking forwards to 108. Would like to hear about: Helena Sashimi Cooking with crescent Sereth Dawn Spear Ragnarok

Adam Davies

Yesssss cooking with Riel!!!

Jack

This is my favorite of your stories by a decent bit; the setting and world are great and Nestra is your best MC, imo. Really amazing work and I have re-read more than once since finding it. Agree with some of the other commenters that the ending was a bit surprising.

Beelzy

Excited for 108 full steam ahead, yay!

Joe ?

Well maybe you'll cover it in the epilogues, but I think the star people are a big loose end. I'd have liked some more scenes with the azshi, seeing how weird all their stuff is. That brief portion in Europe where we got to see how a different part of the works lives was interesting. I'm looking forward to 108, that was hitting the right spot for me. Goofy person for an epilogue: that guy that was learning to cook by watching nestra.

Briar Rosier

Blanking on his name, but her lizardkin half-brother should get something. Definitely Sereth’s sister. Prob her visiting Earth? And maybe deciding to stay? Maybe work something about the star people in somewhere? Maybe she mentions it to some of her coven and then brings them to the station, and they realize that this is from the people who caused one of the Azhii wars? Or whatever they are Definitely have a bit showing those dwarf-like people she met on her way to the Azhii home realm sharing the shoey culture. If she would be able to survive (prob not since she’s still technically human), maybe Helena gets taken to the Azhii home realm? Or showing her progress/training/meeting with other Azhii.

Cape-tiveAudience

The world deserves a cooking with Crescent episode featuring Sashimi.

Justin Golenbock

Ooof…rough. LOVE your work but this feels more like you lost interest in the story/character than brought to a close. Disappointing but i guess that’s serialized prog fantasy on Patreon these days, tbh. So many unresolved threads and Nestra is barely halfway through her progression! Maybe leave off with “epilogues” and keep it paused instead, in case you ever feel like returning? Hope you do!

Ricky Kukowski

What ever happened to that demon story you were considering at the same time you originally considered changling?

Ricky Kukowski

I disagree. This is her securing her place within humanity and humanity as having a safer place in the multiverse. This feels like a good end to me. Could the series branch off from here, for sure, but I feel satisfied

Ricky Kukowski

Interesting take on the transition thing. I took it as they were always pretending not to be trans, but the switch to B grade made their body take on how they really felt they should be.

matt

What? no killing agathon, SS class turn into a sentient blackhole? No fixing the space station? No exploring the multiverse? boo.

Guessed

Oh yeah I could see it working that way, that's sort of a lot to talk about there though for the story to end next chapter. I'll add it to adversary civilization, lizardman diplomacy, and revenge on my list of things to wonder about.

Tyler Hammack

Loved reading this story from you, thanks for the good times with Changeling and looking forward to more good times with 108

Leviathon251

I think this story has come to a nice ending. You could probably drag it out longer, making the eventual goal catching up to or outsmarting her dad but im satisfied by keeping the focus on earth and Nezhra's relationships there. Idk. I like it. The last couple chapters definitely could have been better but truthfully with the level of powerscaling and the way ascension works i just couldnt beleive that she could ever beat the big bad unless you did like a thousand year time skip. I like that the focus stayed comparatively small scale. Its nice.

iliail

surely Marcus/Maria epilogue for your 5 (maybe 6) trans readers

Flugufrelsarinn

Big Thank you for the story. I would prefer no spoilery epilogues, and for you to come back in a couple years when you realise how amazing that Nestra character you made was, and how much potential story there is in her future. Im gona miss her

Bentopox

Nooooo, I thought this was an early April fools joke for sure. Ahhhhhhhhhh

Benjamin Mages

First, thank you for sharing this story with us. I love Nestra and the world you've made. However this, more than either of your other finished stories, feels like it's kind of... unfinished. The end of Book 1 of a series maybe (or Book 2), but not the end. The end of Calamitous Bob and Journey were the end of those protagonist's stories. It was a complete ending, including a super epic battle. And sure, Nestra isn't a near godlike being unlike her counterparts at the endings of their stories, but still; in comparison the ending is a bit anti-climactic. That is to say, I was not expecting this notification. I hope that one day you come back to Nestra and her story, because I think there's a lot more to tell.

DarkMin28

Since you asked for feedback I will write the thoughts I have had for the last few months of reading the story as well as my thoughts on the ending as a whole. First, thank you for the story. Don't let what I am about to say take away from just how much I enjoyed reading about the world and Nestra living in it. I will keep my eye out for your future work as well as take a look at your previous work because I enjoyed it so much. For the ending, I agree with you that it feels hollow, and I would recommend you keep it that way. Rather then Sereth and Stibbs wedding I would have Nestra's brothers wedding and done 2-3 different perspectives for an epilogue. Start with Ragnarök talking with Moon dancer and over all explaining what has happened with the city, what the future looks like for the city and humanity, including further explaining the reasons why Shinran is no longer a threat to humanity. I understand why but some readers may not have understood why Ragnarök thinks he is good now. Then I would transition to the brothers wedding and give us Nestra's mom's perspective. Have Camille escort Nestra to the event and using it as an opportunity to network with members of the Palladian clan, hell have Claire take them under her wing to help with their growth. Let Nestra's mom lament how Nestra hasn't let the last few months go, and she doesn't know how to just relax and let others shoulder the burden and that her now stronger attachment to Camille is a futher cope with the lose of Val, someone she never quite nailed down how she felt about. End with her saying that Nestra can take time now and live secret free surrounded by loved ones who can wait for her to finally calm down. Then you can give nestra for her final bit with her coven and her being overly commited to raiding and helping her "rival" grow. With something similiar you can take a moment to talk about all the things Nestra does not care about while giving readers the information they personally might care about. I would not (personally) reccomend changing up the order of things to make the UN address the final moments followed by an epilogue. It feels more meaningful to have Val's death happen after what would be in most story's the pivotal moment. This is cyberpunk at its finest, sweeping the rug out from under you and reminding everyone that the world is still an awful and ugly place even if some amount of it has settled down. The only true complaint I have now after everything is said and done is just how jarring Nestra referring to members of the Azhii as "Males" and "Females". Given that the two sexes do not procreate with one another reffering to them as only their sex is just weird. There is no reason in this world that Gender isn't a thing especially when they are a giant melting pot of cultures and peoples. Instead jsut make up an Azhii word that she uses early on, let Sereth slip that it means "To walk" for the males and "To create" for females. As in one walks the path and the other creates the path. It is always takes me out of the moment when any story uses males/females to refer to people, just never feels right when man/woman is right there and fits the bill just as well. Sad to see it go, glad I got to be here at the end. Good luck with your future writings Mecanimus.

Novels by Mecanimus

The 50 years into the future is too narrow. Even I have no idea what would happen then. I will do a Sereth Stibbs epilogue though, and think of one that has her family.

Novels by Mecanimus

I don't want to touch the star people but I will include an epilogue on Helena.

Novels by Mecanimus

The Star People I would rather leave mysterious, sorry. It's not an episode about a character.

Novels by Mecanimus

I know. I just don't have it in me. I planned on ending this here from the start. Maybe in a few years I'll revisit it.

Owen

Hmm maybe not but I wished there was more on the star people mystery, I was hoping that would get investigated by Nestra

Novels by Mecanimus

Ah no 108 will fully replace Changeling so I'l, publish one chapter per week as soon as the epilogues are done. Agreed for the rest though one thing is that I can't fix an arc mid arc. I realized too late that it wasn't working out and by then I couldn't just toss out an entire book and ask people to wait one month while I replan it. It just wouldn't be tolerated at all.

Novels by Mecanimus

I will also propose another, slower project and Sidis. I'll let people vote again.

Novels by Mecanimus

This one isn't about a person so I'll avoid it, but I might revisit it. I actually know what happened so it might be worth a tale.

Novels by Mecanimus

I actulally decided I would end it when I started. This was always meant to be the end, I just didn't stick the landing this time.

Novels by Mecanimus

I think it's best if the world is still engaging rather than fully explored at the end of a story. At least, I think so!

Novels by Mecanimus

Ok adding one for Sashimi and Dawn Spear. The others are already planned, but for Ragnarok I don't have an idea.

Novels by Mecanimus

Ok for a Cooking with Crescent episode! And for the star people I'll think of something.

Novels by Mecanimus

I can do both, but seriously when I started the story I intended on stopping there.

Novels by Mecanimus

I will rewrite it and write the intro to another project and let people vote.

Novels by Mecanimus

Yes, and now that I think about it, the cyberpunk element was the main draw and Nestra has outgrown it.

Novels by Mecanimus

Yeah as I said, I need to make a better end, and perhaps revisit it in the future.

Novels by Mecanimus

A bit too narrow as I like to keep things open-ended. For the males vs females it serves to emphasize the separation between the genders. And also a bit of suspicion on the coven's side.

iliail

hell yeah

Max

I remember u saying it will end while she is B class - and I see what u where going for, I will def reread after the edits

Lexstok

I would love to read a page or so on Sereth and Stibbs and their child. Day in the life of…

Lexstok

Also will there ever be a time Nestra will find someone to love, or is that not in her?

Detruejedi

Ya I really wanted to see her kill her dad

eric

I request a Sashimi paragraph!

eric

I just finished reading what there is of 108. Does anyone have any good suggestions to tide me over until it starts back up again?

cfehunter

Think I'll hold off the epilogues in case you pick this back up, or extend it with the book edit. The start to middle were incredibly engaging. I absolutely devoured this story after finishing Journey. It was fun, I feel some things went a bit wonky after the return to earth, and the time spent on the heavenly world feels worse in hindsight because it really never becomes relevant again. I'm glad we got to see Sereth and Stibbs married, it was a good thing to end it on, even with the many unfinished plots remaining.