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Asuka's kick was so strong and precise that knocks Lili down to the ground. Still awake, but very stunned, Lili remain on the ground for some seconds, unable to do anything. Then, Asuka makes her next move. She approaches her fallen opponent and steps on her throat, pinning Lili down and making her cough as she holds Asuka's ankle with both hands, hoping to lift her foot.

-Asuka: One blow and you're already down? Man, you're weak!
-Lili: get...off...me...
-Asuka: Get off you? Why would I do that? If you're so superior, I'm sure you will manage to escape somehow.

Lili struggles, using all her strength to escape, but her arms are no mach for Asuka's leg at all. After almost one minute of struggle, Lili start to get more and more desparate, both for the humiliation of being stepped on by Asuka and pinned under her foot and the pain she is causing on her as she chokes her.
Eventually, her vision gets darker and darker as her grip on Asuka's ankle gets weaker and weaker. Asuka watches it all with a grin on her face. Seeing her arrogant rival almost passing out, completely helpless under her boot is something she always wanted, and a good way to teach her a lesson.

-Asuka: Well, Looks like you're not doing so good down there.
*Lili tries to answer, but she can't.
-Asuka: You endured one minute, but I wonder if you can go through another one. I guess we will have to find out.


Original version: https://www.deviantart.com/jvfemdom/art/Rivalry-part-2-832887583

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Anonymous

Loving the remake so far! As a lili fan though I hope asuka gets her comeuppance 😆

Anonymous

I actually have not seen the original. Might wait for the upcoming parts to see how things pan out 😉. Great work as always!

jvfemdom

Thanks man! This remake will follow the original's story. I'm changing the poses a little and rewriting some parts better, but the overall story will be the same.

SonicTheHedgehog17

As much as I love seeing this, as I've seen a lot of renders where Asuka is the loser... I'm not gonna lie, I wanna see Lili put Asuka under her feet as revenge and humiliate her even more by forcing her to kiss her foot ^^