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Ailith

What a kind and helpful fairy! I'd name her Azure.

Nodrog

Will any of my suggested names be in the poll? ; w ; My company: Keep dreaming buddy.

Nanakra

Watch that last step just after the bend, its a doozie of a drop! Anything fairy is good in my book, +1 for Azure as well.

Ehren

Oh, the internal view is new, I like it! Can I recommend making the flower in her hair a bit more of a noticeably different hue of blue than her hair? I think it's just a tiny bit too close right now. Then again, it's a WIP, so maybe you were planning to do that anyway.

Nikern

Uhuhuhu <3 *.*

Doc

But who is the best tour guide in all of felarya?

GizmoChinasa

Awesome! I need a tour sometime! :3 I'd prefer a long visit to the gullet exhibit! x3

JohnboyX

Really really good :-) . Apart from the adjustments/additions you wanted to make yourself this only needs a bit more detail on the human in the fairies mouth so you can better make out that the prey is a girl (maybe by revealing more like with the prey in Melany's mouth in "Trapper and prey" for example her chest if that is still possible) with the inclusion of a saliva string directly hitting her and then it's perfect (in my opinion) . Fabulous work so far °__^.

Agora

You know what, I think I liked the original B&W's last panel better. Her eyes seemed better oriented at her stomach, her lips' curves were cuter for some reason, too! The uvula shot and burp in that panel feel superfluous, as well, and I actually liked the simpleness of no stomach shot to leave it to the imagination, but that's just because I don't care for stomach shots, I think : P

PrinnyDood

Looks great! Felaryan 'tours' are a longstanding tradition, and you'd be amazing how many natives are happy to take time out of their day to provide them. Such a friendly place! x3