So close.. (Patreon)

Elorie's mouth X3 In the inked pages of the cursed relic comic, I'm going to do a full page mawshot to convey just how terrifying Filia's position is, having to climb into Elorie's mouth while she's asleep to go get the rope.. Just a short trip but that could easily turn into a much, much longer one..

I also tried to convey a slow, sleeping breathing with those onomatopoeia but I'm not sure they're the best for that situation.  What do you think ? :3

EDIT : Argh.. I can't believe it.. Just now I missclicked on a windows to close it and accidentally closed the PSD file instead in a flattened state. And... well it saved it. Which means the picture is now unusable ( as it has now only one layer ) and I will have to do it again. What a bummer :/

EDIT2 : Ok it's not THAT bad.. using levels I managed to make a version where i essentially made the picture super bright in order to remove the grey at a cost of some details. it's still going to need some rework but it's certainly better than having to restart entirely from scratch..