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Hey Patreonaroonies, so here in the extra credit classroom I'm always trying to think of cool stuff I can share without pulling the curtain too far back on what goes into my lesson prep. So here's something I do for every video, which is to write out a full script and then print it and mark notes all over it while reading it out loud. It helps me with pacing and finding good improv-sounding jokes to put in the final draft. 

Most of my favorite moments come from this phase, where I'm away from the computer at a bar or something, just burning through the script like I hate it and scratching out anything that bothers me for something faster and sharper. It's my cure to writer's block and I've never made a script worse when making notes like this. 

Check the attachment for the original "Avoiding Politics" script and see how many of those notes made it into the final lesson. Also check out the part where I wrote "insert well written final comment" -- that's just lazy writing Erik you dumb fuck! My second favorite part is my insistence on making this joke about frying your t-shirts before wearing them. Anyway, fry your shirts and please enjoy.

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Laura Burchell

This is really interesting, I love it! Thanks for sharing!

Alex Schwartz

Bounced on my boys dick to this thanks teacher Erik

Amanda Whitt

Thank you for sharing this, teacher Erik! I've truly learned a lot!

Ralph Perrotta

This is legit super insightful and anyone who writes should see it.

Clancy Bundy

Nice. I’m glad you found a way to take your process outta the house. I do that shit too. Keeps ya from feeling like a moldy hermit, but still being productive.

Michael

Bounced on my boys Ukrainian balcony to this catch it on foxxxxxxx baby

Clarisse Carlson

Some of the crossed out comments were pretty funny

hoppy1478

This is really cool! Thank you for sharing. It's neat to see people's different creative processes.

Curious Bowser

help i cant post comments cuz they give me viruses!!!!!!!!

Torin D

Looks like the Zodiac killers writing Erik been the Zodiac all along

Michael Pace

Damn, seeing the episode written out makes me appreciate your work so much more

Tiffany

Would be so cool to see these occasionally. Loved the notes.

@thiccrat_

Always? in the years ive been giving you free money, ive gotten very little in return. its okay, im giving so little money i dont care, thats how it always worked. i havent even been watching any of the videos for like a year, until this last one. haha! depression!

@thiccrat_

looks like this should be fun to try to read. thx bb

Sarah Alderdice

This is definitely the coolest Patreon reward I've ever received. I actually keep my own scribbles just in case I become famous enough for them to matter one day, but I never thought I'd be able to look at someone else's. Keep 'em coming, daddy

fluffer

Oh hell yeah Erik, this is awesome. Do you have any scripts of older episodes laying around? Maybe you could share those too!

Dave Cannon

Wait, this isn't all off the top of your head?

Thomas Field

Release the rest of the scripts dad

Drake Frazier

I want to see the script from the second Mandela Effect.

Drake Frazier

I want to see the script from the second Mandela Effect.

Drake Frazier

I want to see the scri... Wait. Who are you??