Soviet Rocket Family Tree dialogue cut review / preview! (Patreon)

Fantastic news!!! The dialogue cut of "The entire history of Soviet Rocket Engines" is done and ready for review / preview!!! [currently in 240p, but 4k should be done soon]  

SOME IMPORTANT NOTES:  

YOUR FEEDBACK SHOULD GO IN THE GOOGLE SHEET, but only AFTER you read this ---->  

This is a DIALOGUE CUT. It's VERY rough, there will be spots that get tighened up, edits smoothed out, color gets fixed, sound gets improved, and most importantly there'll be MOUNTAINS of vital B-ROLL and visuals on screen for the final cut (as always).  

That being said, please take notes of any factual errors you may hear or if you have any burning questions or suggestions you feel like need to be addressed. At this point I'm not looking for specific script feedback (we're well beyond that) but more like "You said 7,520 kN when you mean to say 7,250 kN", really just looking for errors, not personal conjectures. Again, feedback should go on our google sheet [link below]  

Here's what you'll need:  

TIME: A LOT. It's over an hour and a half long. You'll have to be very committed to make it through a VERY DULL VERY BLAND DIALOGUE CUT haha  

The Script: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zvkk3Mw4rmo_-CK0b3HHdzz6qme_qZNmtZ8cx7Jovlc/edit?usp=sharing 

The FEEDBACK page: [PLEASE KEEP COMMENTS IN TIME STAMP ORDER] https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/15Jvcz_9X3zbLFtm-sH7jq68W9pjUmCgV_1eRCP1KayA/edit?usp=sharing 

The chart:  https://lucid.app/lucidchart/invitations/accept/inv_f8be8772-8479-4683-8434-cc14e683a0c5 

And lastly the video link [currently in 240p, 4K render should be done soon]: https://youtu.be/UEQ3v3CNRbg 

Thank you so much!!! It's happening, slowly, but it's happening haha. The next two weeks will be busy with Inspiration 4 and traveling regarding that, but hopefully we'll make some progress here by the end of the month to show you with the big chart and what not. This thing is insane!!!