My thoughts regarding audio commission so far (Patreon)

Hi,

I wanted to share with you my impression about the new added audio and hopefully motivate you to share your opinion regarding it aswell. I will split it into topics, cause I think its important for detailed analysis.

1. Quality of the audio

I think the quality itself is pretty good. The audios are clean. Some parts feel a bit "acted" and I will ask to rerecord them for the main commission. 

2. How I integrated the audio into the scene so far

This one is partially good and partially meh. Needs some adjusting for sure. Here is what I think about the different parts, where I added the audio.

Spanking part 

Pretty good. Would leave it as it is and only add new audio files.

Idling part

I have added talking loop, when the girl idles. So she says some stuff every 5-7 seconds. So far its kinda meh. Gets repetitive fast. Definitely needs more audio files. Maybe longer pauses between talking. Also some longer sentences could be good, maybe some jokes, puns etc.

Sex part

There is a counter linked to a loop trigger brick, so she says something every 15-20 seconds. Also meh right now imho. Needs more phrases and also would be very cool to have Emmas voice in VaMMoan. So hopefully it will work out and hazmhox will agree to add it :D

Phrases on transition

I have added some direct triggers on Timeline animations. Some are fine (like the ass or boner part), others need adjusting in timing (when she switches to BJ for example) and more different phrases.

Phrases on touch

Only added couple of them on touching her boobs. The result is pretty okayish imho, so I will add these also for other body parts. Just need more audio for that.

3. Current plans ideas for the main commission  

- More moans

- Longer sentences

- Some flirty talk, dirty talk, jokes, other stuff for improvisation

- "What would you say if" part. Phrases for touching different body parts, situations

This is basically all what I think about the commission. Would be cool to hear your impressions so far, ideas and if I am on the right path!