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Revised Prologue Completed. (Patreon)

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2017-09-03 19:08:48
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2026-06
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And here we are guys. Apologies for this step backwards, but we're going to be moving forwards from here on out. Thanks for the support and patience. =)


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RAGSPrologueRevised.pdf

Comments

Tracy Scops

I really love it. You did great with the dialogues. I'm not too fond of your choice for speech fonts, but that's probably just my personal taste. Also, the rabbit censoring irks me in a profound way, but mostly because any kind of visual censoring irks me in profound ways. (You know me, right?) So, my final score is 9.5 clit boners. ;)

Tracy Scops
>>7035641

Oh, one other detail: The hands on the guy looking through the glass could have had the same effect her boobs have when pressed against the glass. Nothing too important, but it does make a difference when you're trying to state the presence of the glass in the panel. :)

New Age Ninja Corps

For the characters speech fonts i was really looking for something...military. And without getting into super fancy fonts that looked terrible at 8pt, i went with what I had. I just wanted there to be a huge difference between when the civilians speak, and when Regina and the other military person speak. I'm keeping an eye out for a better font. So as far as the censorship bunnies, those are going to be there for a bit longer. the NSFW package is missing a few items and I wanted them perfect before I shipped out. Thanks for the feedback!