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Hey guys! Wanted to say thank you for helping make my release of Sense amazing. I couldn't have done it without you! <3 I have one request, if you haven't left a review on Amazon, I would adore it if you could help me with that. 

As for this chapter, yay end of fight scenes for a little while, hopefully! I hate fight scenes! I also can't decide what to call this chapter. Any of those titles look good? Or another you think would be better? Let me know.

Stay home, stay safe, stay happy! <3 

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Insight Chapter 3 - Blood

Chapter Three - Blood In the wake of the flames, the grass of the square was burnt to a crisp, leaving it looking like a charred wasteland as monsters moved towards her. They simply moved over their fallen comrades. There were sylfae who'd been further away still fluttering in the air, joined now...

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Andrew Meyers

I'd go with Blood, since this is the chapter where the most blood is drawn. She isn't really alone, or stuck in darkness with all the flashy weaponry being used, and 'help' feels like it only plays a minor role since she does almost all of it herself. "Chaos" could also fit, since her commands basically caused that to be a key theme of her fight.

Dennis Palsson

Baby dragons is the best end to a chapter ever.