Elysium? Chapter Two (Patreon)

So yeah. I've been working on this for most of a day, and let me tell you, creating a VRMMO is haaaaaaaard work. However, I think I've finally got most of the mechanic basics and stuff that I need down, so I was gonna go to sleep, and then my brain said "No, you need to write chapter 2." So I did.

I have -very- tentatively put this one on commenting mode for the first time in ages. Please, please don't make me regret it by being trying to change the font size or going after punctuation or double spaces.  It's there for legit comments or suggestions for improvement, though please KEEP IN MIND that I am not going to change my story to suit your taste. It's my story, I'm just an amateur first time game designer, so if I screw that up, that's more what concerns me.

Thank you for your love and support. <3 

PS. I had to do a few edits of chapter 1 this afternoon, so if you notice any discrepancies, I changed a few things and you might want to reread.