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Okay, so there was actually a rather large fix last night that I had to do because I'd forgotten about which death mechanics I'd chosen to utilize, so the encounter in ch 10 was altered to reflect that.

Another side note, please stop trying to fix bunnycorpse and skillbook. I wrote it that way on purpose. :P Also, don't try to fix the Canadian, please.

Anywho, hope y'all are having a good start to the...how is it the weekend already!? Man, my days are seriously blurring together with my messy sleep schedule.  Ah well. 

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Elysium Chapter 18

Chapter Eighteen Seventeen bunnycorns later, she took stock of her inventory once more. She'd managed to find a path that had been cleared out at the right time so she could take advantage of the respawns, shooting down as many as four at a time with a simple spell.

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Andrew Meyers

As a Canadian, I have never heard anyone here speak like that, except the 'eh' maybe. 'yous' and 'pays' sound more like a new york accent than a Canadian one. Otherwise, great chapter again :-)

Siphon

Lel, I made a canadian author write that, so I dunno what to tell you. XD Different region, mebbe?

Andrew Meyers

Yeah, must be. I have coworkers across several regions, and none of them speak like that, so I'm not sure which area that author would be from.

Siphon

The answer I received was more atlantic. But yeah. It has been modified slightly after I spent a bit talking with a different canadian and going through accents. >.<

Dennis Palsson

I work with a guy from the east coast and he talks a bit like that.