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Insight Chapter 31 - Mortal (Patreon)

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2021-11-18 16:54:46
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Hey guys,

Hope you're having a lovely week! I'm off into downtown Seattle today, so wish me luck! 

Thanks for all your love and support! <3

(And this chapter might be a bit dark, just warning.)

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Insight Chapter 31 - Mortal

Chapter Thirty One - Mortal Cautiously, Jade reached into the well of her magic, letting her spiritual magic flow towards her smallest scars, albeit being slightly nervous about them being on her face. She focused her intention on healing the scar, smoothing out her spirit and getting rid of the ...

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Aaron Schwartz

Where did this wound in her spirit come from? What left it? Why is she only mentioning it now if her spirit magic has been working since that morning? I feel like a scene got left out somewhere…

Mike G.

Good chapter, thanks. It is a bit bleak, but well within reason. And I agree on the Pern dragon imbalance being unfair, although if the riders could jump between on their own, they might do so by reflex at the shock as well...

Mike G.
>>72059439

The wound came from the ghost attacking her at the funeral I believe

Siphon
>>72059439

It did come from the funeral. And I will probably be going back to add in more phantom pains in editing because I forgot to do that, but as to why she didn't know...well, it comes back to her just now figuring out how to see living spirits. She doesn't instantly know how to do everything.

Aaron Schwartz
>>72059439

It’s not so much that she didn’t fix it immediately. It’s just that this is the first time we are hearing about a life threatening injury that the POV character is apparently already aware of and actively trying to fix. Also, while I’m glad that there are things she can’t do immediately, I’m not sure why this is one of them… it makes sense that between spirit, healing, and creation, she should be able to do this. Meanwhile, she can genetically engineer people in a snap.

Aaron Schwartz
>>72059439

Wow… not sure how this happened but I missed an entire chapter. I went straight from trust to mortal without reading wounded. No wonder I thought something was wrong.