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Idk what to call this, the ultimate chapter. I thought I was going to end it sooner than I was and just include the last bit in the epilogue, which would have made family the ideal chapter name, but with the rest at the end, Idk. 

I also don't like the special ability description for domain right now. I always hate coming up with the right wording for those, so that ain't final. Ideas welcome, as always.

This has been a trip, not gonna lie. Just the epilogue and some editing to go! Thank you so much for supporting me on this journey, it means the world to me. <3

Now I gotta figure out the blurb too. I kinda forgot I had to write that. I hate the blurb. >.<

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Insight Chapter 44 - World

Chapter Forty-Four - Family? World? Standing in the air above the gate, Jade gazed out one last time at the city she'd come to save. The glow of windows and magic lights was nothing compared to the behemoth of a tree that shone like a beacon against the backdrop of the mountains.

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Justin "Johnist" Johanson

Chapter title should be Family. Next Book title should be Domain... although I would love the sequel to Lorus Lake before the next book in this series...

Stuart Thwaites

Am I alone in thinking 'heartbreak' is a bit too strong? I know people can and do fall that hard and that fast but after rereading everything from Briar's appearance, I don't think Jade felt that deeply. Maybe 'heartache'? It's still pretty strong but isn't a synonym for 'world shattering'

Anonymous

It may seem a bit odd but jade has never experienced a romantic attraction do you remember your first crush as a teenager? She trusted him and had enough faith in him that she'd planned to leave what pretty much amounts to a 'will' with him if she died and he let his mom call her his pet. That hurt just reading let alone experiencing 😢