Some update notes. (Patreon)

I've gone back and completely re-edited Volume 1, again. (Spent 7 hours on this today, just submitted it to Amazon for review)

I removed several instances of repetition, including my overeager usage of the phrase "His eyes flashed" as well as "nodding" at the ends of conversation. Other instances were places where I explained something, and then re-explained it a few chapters later pointlessly.I also corrected typos.

As a result of this, I'm also considering re-doing or, at least, re-hiring my voice-actor guy to heavily re-edit my Audiobook. ($$$, sigh)

Alas, if only I made these changes when I hired him in the first place. Foolish Wiz.