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Looking back, I think I may have gone into a little bit too much detail when it comes to certain recent chapters. Over the next 1-2 days, I'll be going back and working to remove bits of excessive backstory/background info that slows the story down a little, just FYI for those that might look back at previous chapters and notice they might be shorter. 

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Anonymous

Good choice. I was going to mention that I think some of the chapters were too slow/ detailed

Idan tal

Good idea, just not the last one pls, add more to the ending ;)

Anonymous

Sounds good it’s your world!

Horatio Hornet

The info was very good, just at times it felt like you repeated it two or three times in different ways. Specifically thinking of when you were talking about people getting "drunk". It gets pretty wordy... :)

Idan tal

So which of the chapters should we read again?

Timothy E O'Neal

Yeah, well I'm gonna have to re-read the book in order to remember half the stuff you wrote anyways plus the editorial snark

wiz

I'll let you all know when I re-release the chapters here :) been editing the past few days offline