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Trent

Nooooo

wiz

The current chapter, without the later perspective, is only 900 words long, far too short to feel meaningful. Hence, I can't in good conscience release it in its present state. I plan to expand more on it and have more progression/dialogue.

Max E Malekzadeh

Take your time man, don't try to rush so hard it hurts you.

wiz

I know :( I wanted to release it to y'all, but I couldn't release something that I wasn't pleased with. The perspective I shifted to the next chapter flowed much better in its future iteration than it did in the current chapter.

Dire

I care that you release chapters, but I don't care when. If it is on the way, I'm happy. Of course, if a release schedule helps you write then great but as a member of Team Bystander. . . it's cool.

Nate El

Holy crap you are prolific my friend. Hope you Get some great sleep.

TJ Neumee

If we get two today, I think you did not fail. You said 5 chapters in 5 days. You can still do it Wiz!!

Kyler

Just glad you're back in a place to be able to write this much I'm not super worried about the challenge.

Anonymous

Regardless of the release the increased communication is great!