WIP- Sleepless Nights 03 (Patreon)
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2018-06-17 20:38:39
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The dialog on this page went through like 10 rewrites hahah ^_^;;....
It's surprisingly hard to write a conversation between two lovers which doesn't feel forced or sappy (I'm looking at you, Attack of the Clones), but with Ozawk and Ghostbane's help I think the conversation between Joshua and Tsenaya comes off as fairly natural with just a little awkward in there to make it realistic.
This also took a bunch of redraws, which is why it's taken so long to get these sketches out, but thankfully the next two pages of Sleepless nights are sketched and will be finished soon!
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