WIP- Sleepless Nights 16 (Patreon)

I'm finding myself having to redraw quite a few of the thumbnails for this comic as I go along...not because the story is changing (because it's not), but because many of the ideas I had back when I first sat down and banged out all the thumbnails for Sleepless Nights were just...bad? Or maybe just not that well thought out. 

In any case, I'm much happier with this page now that I've zoomed out quite a bit and let the majority of both their bodies be seen so their positioning is clear before I zoom in on the next page. 

I'm really trying to get that "aheago" face in the bottom right panel but despite my efforts it still doesn't seem right? Maybe it's the ballgag getting in the way of her mouth. I'll keep at it and see what we come up with :3.