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[A Fractured Song] - Chapter 97 - Fantasy, Isekai (Portal Fantasy), Adventure (Patreon)

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2021-02-04 13:51:31

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So here's a short question of the update (I'm sorry I'm working on something on the side for Fractured that could turn out very well for the series, can't say what it is, but if it's successful yessss): What do you think of the "voice" of Fractured Song aka the style that I've written it as? Is it too blunt? Too tongue-in-cheek? Flows badly? What are your thoughts?

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[A Fractured Song] - Chapter 97 - Fantasy, Isekai (Portal Fantasy), Adventure

Chapter 97: Caught Gathering in one of the supply wagons, the teens found out that the news was not good. It was enough to make Martin mutter loudly about the universe always giving them bad luck. The normally grim Ginger looked poleaxed. Ayax's features were unreadable, but her tail swished si...