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Poll (Patreon)

Published:
2025-04-13 02:26:42
Edited:
2025-04-13 02:27:13
Imported:
2026-06

Poll

Poll

  • New style is okay. 13
  • Old style was better. 0
  • Don't cate. 10
  • 2025-04-13
  • 23 votes
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Content

I've been trying to add more details to my chapters recently trying to make them more engaging and I would appreciate it if you could give me some feed back. Thanks..

Comments

Lictor Magnus

I think the quality of your writing has always been good, my issue with the stories is the rapid rate the waifus/captures are acquired. There’s no build up for most of them and they happen so quick we don’t even have time to get a feel for their relationship to the MC or even each other. Vita is handling that better than the other stories when it comes to his classmates but not so much when it comes to the monster girls.

Rimurugale

Good to know thanks. That is something I'm currently working on improving.

Sir_dood134

There are enough waifus in hp that the oc's really weren't needed. Especially with all the screen time they get.

Sir_dood134

I dropped Naruto after 15 chapters because of the lack of detail and character development. You jumped from mission to mission, plot point to plot point, without just letting the characters talk. Made it a rather boring read imo. Hp has been somewhat better but still too fast. Pacing needs cut some. Danmachi has been the best. Still feel it needsa little more interaction between people but has had the best balance by far.