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On the Amorals (Patreon)

Published:
2023-10-29 08:50:17
Imported:
2026-06
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Went for a kind of Frazetta-y vibe with this lore page.

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Stephen Wells

Lore post establishes that actual dragons exist here and, of course, they fuuuuuuuck.

Commissar Doggo

If Amorals want something challenging, couldn't they delve into the lower layers of the world? I presume a few millenia to eons old and likewise levelled beings exist down there to give them a good fight (or a onesided slaughter).

Tinwhisker

Maybe it's been done before but drains having 4 balls is interesting. There could be cool reasoning behind that; something about the female genitals being large, cavernous, maze-like? Requiring even larger loads or sperm in such large numbers to find the eggs.

Owen Garrett

I'm not gonna sugarcoat it; I think the bit about the ambassador in the second paragraph lands a bit too far over the line. I know the whole point is to be repugnant, but it's just rape-y enough that instead of shocking and/or titillating it's just kinda depressing.

Zeuvembie

Anything that moves. Or that stays still too long.

HardShell

So do Amorals act as potential Allies or Enemies to player characters?

Tinwhisker

Yeah, I realized that after I wrote it (viewing on mobile) but upon reflection I kinda like my idea.

Nep Nep

that feels more like the point though, amorals are supposed to be not enjoyable to interact with and/or know of, sorta like if you think of the setting/background of Berserk, it's not a fun time

Kameron Crutcher

That dragon has 4 balls and is gonna turn that girl into a bottle rocket

LessThan3

Goddamn this may be my favorite thing you've ever posted.

Owen Garrett

I get that, I just think that in this instance it detracts from the piece rather than adding to it. YMMV, but for me it feels tonally dissonant with the rest of the Shagahol stuff. Too "Book of Vile Darkness" for my liking, to make an old-ass 3rd Ed. D&D reference.

Shelbo

Is the couple fucking against the wall beneath the orc supposed only have one head?

Vice & Violence

The other option is to have the orc cut her head off, if that's a little more palatable. I'm fine with either.

Owen Garrett

I was actually thinking about that possibility. I think it follows the tone a bit better. Of course, this is your work and your decision to make, and whether you decide to change it or keep it as is, I do appreciate you taking the time to look at my feedback.

Jaemo

The dragon! 🤩