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Hi everyone ^^

It’s only 4 pages this time, but I wanted to share what I have so far instead of making you wait too long!

Lately I’ve been putting a bit more focus on story and dialogue, leaning into a slower build-up instead of rushing things. I’m curious , do you enjoy this kind of slow burn approach?

I’ve also been thinking about possibly adding a girlfriend for the MC, but I’m honestly a bit unsure about the direction. If he ends up getting involved with the main woman while having a girlfriend… would that already be considered NTR? 🤔

Or would you all prefer to keep things simpler, like the MC staying single and just focusing on his relationship with the retired actress?

I’m kind of on the fence here, so I’d love to hear your thoughts. If most of you are interested in the girlfriend route, I’ll go ahead and design the character and share it here for your approval

As always, thank you so much for your support and patience, it really means a lot <3

More coming soon!

— Scarlett

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King Crimson

Yaaay! So pretty 🥺❤️ I don't mind, choose you fav ♥️

BBBen

Follow your instincts for whatever story seems most interesting to you. :D

Alman

sorry to ask, but isn't it supposed to be page 9-12?

Alman

thank you for the clarification 🥰 i thought i missed out some pages 😅

Deuce

Anal and I'm happy

Kuroro

I believe the original direction of the story is already perfect! No need to add a 3rd party (like a girlfriend or an ex). Since this will take 50+ pages, focusing on the story while building the characters and their relationship will be more fun and enjoyable in the long run. Those who voted for Pure Romance will also feel a sense of belongingness since their voices were heard.

Onedude207

Keep the MC single and his relationship to the retired actress. I like a nice feel good story, no NTR or cheating.

Katsuki

I think virgin is even better than single. And by the way, waiting for a monthly update does feel way too slow. My suggestion is to release a promotional poster every time there’s an update, and this poster could be hot.

CCG

Chief Mei is also a retired actress. Can she guest star in the follow-up story?

Wil South

I like this slow burn approach and can't wait to see how the story develops. I'm not sure a girlfriend is such a good idea, but I think they need a bit of outside impetus to bring them closer together. Perhaps she gets harassed by another customer and he comes to her aid?

Jackson May

Slow burn is okay. But you have to balance slow with regular updates. If a TV show gets too boring you'd stop watching. I know you're juggling a few projects like games. But there should be reasonable updates with reasonable contents. Just sharing my thoughts on overall pacing.

Jackson May

Also I would love to see another My Wife is an Escort series!!! Milk! Wife! NTR! Cuckhold!