Rough Sketch for Vigil's Valor (Patreon)

Hey everyone, though I'd share this very rough line art for Vigil's Valor. Definitely needs a few tweaks. I don't love the open mouth scream, the background is too scifi, as is the combat shottie, and the guy is a bit more thickset than on cover one. With that said, I really like the pose and think its going to look awesome once its all finished. What do you all think? Like? Dislike? Anything you'd want to see changed?