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For those not still playing, yes this is a real achievement.

I can't remember the last comic I made where the final panel wasn't two panels wide. I tend to like to keep the final panel by itself just because it lessens the chance of the punchline being spoiled as you read it. In this one however, the final panel would have so much useless space on either side of Keydar, and I couldn't really justify adding another panel in the comic just to make the punchline fall on the next line.

Edit:

I think I may have made a mistake, but I'm not entirely sure. Originally I had Krom constructing the tool in the first panel, much like Keydar is in the 2nd to last panel. This made it clear that Keydar was making the tool in that panel. Once I removed it I think it may have made that second to last panel a bit confusing and out of place. I made an updated version that may make more sense:

Of course, once again, the final panel is 2 panels wide, making my first paragraph of this post a bit obsolete.

Which do you think is better?

Edit #2:

From comments here and Reddit, I've updated the comic to the following 3rd version:

I guess that's a lesson for me. Some panels aren't as extraneous as I think they are.

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Justin Cox

First one. The second one makes it seem like he just earned the title of douchebag out of nowhere to me.

Lars Jago

Second one. Didn't even realize he was making something in the first version. Second one makes it clear where the douchebag comes from.

Joseph Duke

First one, it's a better punchline.

Jayne Lindgren

I like the second one. I think it flows better, and I like the idea that Keydar is getting an achievement directly for being a jerk. (Wouldn't be the weirdest one)

LowVoltage_FPV

3rd time is the charm! Best one by far.

Evgeny Sandu

Third one. Though I don't get the main meaning. How is the first one related to titles?

Churchill (formerly TeaBear)

To me it's the Second. I guess it depends on whether you want the Achievement to be from Actual Crafting or just Keydar's attitude.

Tam Chronin

Looks like I got here in time to say I prefer the third version. =P That's what I get for being busy on a Sunday. :D

Bing Zhao

I think the second one works best for people unfamiliar with WoW, since it just seem like an achievement that happened in association with the action associated with the panel (e.g. keydar being his usual self :P). But the third one is the best for those familiar with WoW.

Fernando

Like the third version better. Also, the title of the achievement is glaring only on the second window. Is this intentional? The purpose is to show it as it just now appeared?