Comic #674: Some Raiders (Patreon)

I wanted this to read like a children's picture book. I wanted the text to sound perfectly natural and innocent, while the images told a different story. I also wanted the images to tell their own narrative about Donald repeatedly screwing up and Krom losing his patience. I also needed it to rhyme.

That made it kind of a challenging comic to write, but I think it worked out well in the end. I only hope it's clear that Donald is being benched in the final panel. He's sat on that bench in earlier comics, so I'm not sure how obvious it is that he's being sat out of the raid without knowing that previous context.