Comic #729: Purified (Patreon)

I was really conflicted on that final panel. I feel like it's a little too text heavy. I seriously considered removing all the text except Gigz' dialogue. Ultimately I felt that the extra Goldshire joke was worth it. I also wasn't sure Narya being corrupted because he was a pervert in some way would land very well without the exposition.

I feel like using game mechanics, like tooltips, or dialogue boxes are a really fun way to deliver exposition. For example, without the tooltip in the final panel, I would need to have Narya say something like "I was staying at Goldshire inn, just passing through, I swear!" which feels very heavy handed.

I also had to manually edit every letter "A" in MOTHER's dialogue because the font's normal "A" makes it a bit harder to read. You can see #728 for comparison on the font and see if you agree.