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Can’t run anymore… Not that she could regardless, but…

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Hee-Ho Man

Olivia Stealth: 100 Brooke Stealth: 10

RottonLuck

Brooke was looking for 64 slices of American cheese

william malone

I think Olivia is catching up with Brooke

Krapnek74

Just argue and do a fat loud and peter and fall on each other and makeout already

Toon Boy

Does Brooke have rolls of fat under her boobs? Or does she just wear really small bras ?

Smartie

Brooke gonna reveal she did cause she didn’t wanna make her as fat as her and then Olivia gonna reveal she knew she was getting bigger and want to be as big as her and then they kiss

Jane

That first panel is just mesmerising to me.

Blue Sky

Trapped 🖤👅🖤

Blue Sky

Yes she has rolls 🖤👅🖤

Showtime

The sound of her huge belly slapping her thighs keeps alerting Olivia. Stealth mission failed! Brooke? Brooke! Broooooooooooke!"

deleted_user_857192742

i'm glad they're talking because i don't think brooke has considered that maybe olivia doesn't mind the extra weight? guess we'll see

heavyhunies

Love how her belly apron completely eclipses her hips from the front

sfa

Please tell me this is when Olivia pulls it back together and Brooke commits to gaining...

NovaFoxyHeavy

Even couldn’t waddle away from her gluttonous act that she’s been caught pig handed in performing. That face squish is major supreme amazing!

TheNameIsGamestar

Let's talk about Salt's writing for a second because this is very good. It's not just a typical "getting fatter" story but something that has depth and meaning between two friends (lovers?) who struggle with weight and food addiction.

Guy Face Thrace

I hope they stay (?) platonic, but whatever happens, happens. One thing is for sure: they both *look* incredible! I love Brooke's fat chins, and how she looks in the last panel in particular ❤️

Phat94

Poking Brooke's flabby face...

Chu

I'd beg to differ, his writing is amazing at times. But i feel like this comic is on a bit of a downward spiral. Making olivia gain weight was unfortunate tbh and ruined the comic for me because i feel like it was a back step in her character development

TheNameIsGamestar

There's still a bit to go for story. We never know what Salt is thinking. Regardless, the writing is good, even if people fall back. I know most of us, myself included, don't want to Olivia fall back, but that can make for good writing too.

Chu

I hope olivia loses weight, would be a step in the right direction for her character development

Chu

Fair, anything u wanna see in particular

Yu

I feel like chins are very underrated lol.

deleted_user_857192742

in my opinion it's not necessarily a back step in her character development just cuz she stopped losing weight. there's been an insane amount of miscommunication between her and brooke since the beginning of tipping the scales and we don't actually know how she feels yet. she might decide that she does want to lose weight again, or that she's okay with being bigger now. we just have to wait and see.

Toon Boy

I’m gonna give a quick critique: while I have been enjoying seeing these characters and the writing and character development has been fun to watch to read and watch, I do feel like this comic has been failing a bit as a weight gain comic. In terms of seeing Brooke or Olivia in fun angles and sequences while binging food. Still I’m here to see the comic till its last pages

Linuz

God, Brooke looks so fucking pretty in that second panel. Is it the chin? It's probably the chin...

Yu

I gotta agree with you on that, I was kinda hoping this wouldn't be a fit to fat to fit again kinda story only because I think it will take away from the weight gain aspect of the comic with time skips and with more dialogue kinda like with this page and maybe the next one too? (this is just my opinion of course :v ... Also I know there's some pages left so I can be completely wrong lol)

Jack Wood

Loving the story so far!!! I don't know exactly where things are going and that makes it rather exciting... keep up the great work!

Toon Boy

I wander why the lights are not turned on in the second panel if she’s trying to sneak at night to get food

jlixirium

The concept of somebody deciding that they're just happier fat? Unheard of! *sarcasm*

Austin Smith

Totally looks like it, I love it!

Chu

Kind of is tbh, olivia in tipping the scales was actually super motivated when losing weight and at the end of tipping the scales and the start of the new comic she was very insistent on having brooke come for a work out. Now all of a sudden because she has a burger she starts over eating and getting bigger again. Its just really unfortunate and bad writing tbh, It would of been great writing to have a contrast with the characters. Brooke being fat because she wants to live life simpler and despite olivia trying to help her lose some pounds it would of been cool to see her become an enabler without realising

Captain Booyah

They both gonna gain weight outta spite of the other? Cause I'm very down for that

deleted_user_857192742

i don’t think her being motivated before means she has to keep losing weight forever for her development to count. character motivations can change over time. she’s still consistently going to the gym 100 days later even after regaining, so that part of her character clearly hasn’t disappeared. and it wasn’t “one burger and suddenly she starts overeating” either cuz the comic shows months of her and brooke repeatedly eating out together while still working out. wanting the weight contrast to continue is fine but that’s a preferred direction, not really an argument that this one is bad writing. plus we still don’t even know what olivia thinks about the regain yet.