A poll on 'Take My Boyfriend'
- I was disappointed by the lack of sex 7
- It's just as hot without any actual sex 11
Now that you've had a chance to read all of my first draft of Take My Boyfriend, I'm keen to know what you think about it.
This is the first story I've ever written when there isn't actually any sex described in the plot. Obviously sex happens - plenty of it - and there are descriptions of what the main character Hugh can hear through the wall, as well as what's happened in the past. But you will have noticed that there's no actual 'action' described in this story - no descriptions of who put what in which hole, what positions, what Steven and Hunter actually did in bed.
Lots of my stories have a bit of that kind of thing, because it's something I find a huge turn-on (from personal experience! 🥵). But usually I provide at least one scene where the cuck gets to watch the action. Not this time though.
Personally, I think it's just as hot (maybe even hotter in some circumstances) to be shut out and having to settle for just listening. But I'm keen to know if you share that opinion having read the story, or if you wanted more actual descriptions of sex.
I should warn you that the results of this poll don't necessarily mean I'll change anything in the final, even if the feedback is overwhelmingly in favour of some visual descriptions. But I'm curious, and I also don't want to leave readers feeling cheated out of what they came for. So please, let me know in the poll what you think. And if you have more to say about it share it in the comments.