Best Man: The full draft (Patreon)

Sorry it's been a while folks. But hopefully it's worth the wait. I've finished my revisions so I wanted to provide you with an early release draft of my latest book, Best Man: A gay cuckold wedding story.

This is the full story - all the chapters including the conclusion. Please note though, I still have some proof-reading to do, so this isn't quite the final version and there may still be some errors throughout the story. 

So if you're the kind of person who'd rather wait and enjoy the full, finished product without spoiling the end in the meantime, then don't read this version! But if you're interested in reading it asap, you're totally welcome to dive into this version knowing that you'll receive an updated, finalised version pretty soon.

If you do read this draft and have any feedback, let me know. I've tried to take on some of the comments I've had so far, especially in terms of finding the balance between excruciating and humiliating exclusion vs still demonstrating the love and care that Josh feels for his cuckold husband. I'm still interested though if there are any particular moments which really go too far one way on the other.

I've also had some feedback that more dialogue would be good - I've added a bit in response to that feedback, but not that much because I can't seem to spot any places that I think need more! So if you have any suggestions about particular bits where a bit more dialogue is needed, let me know.

I'll be proofing it over the next week(ish), so can probably take on minor tweaks during that time. Then it will be done, and ready for publishing.