Updated draft of my story Lockdown With My Husband's Bull (Patreon)
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Hi everyone. You might remember a while back I published a draft of my story Lockdown With My Husband's Bull.
Since then I went to finalise it for sale and decided that I wasn't quite into how it ended up. I wasn't sure exactly what it was, so I kind of just left it alone for a while to think about it. Following that, plus some advice from a friend who read it, I decided to change it a bit.
If you remember the original story, the cuck ends up getting moved out to the pool house to make way for the husband and bull's BDSM playroom, and the climax of the story involves the cuck getting locked out of the house while the bull and husband have dinner with the cuck's friends inside.
In this version, I've chopped off the original ending and reworked it. So the climax of the story is now about the night that the husband and bull first use the new playroom. So it's less plot, but hopefully more in terms of an insight into the cuck's mind and the relationship dynamic.
It's still a draft, so the new sections will definitely require some finessing and might be full of mistakes at this stage. But I'm keen to share it with you, and also to see if you've got any feedback about how it works.
This one has taken me a long time - when I started it covid lockdowns were actually still a common thing, which gives you an idea of how long ago that was.
Anyway, hope you enjoy it. Let me know what you think!
(Oh and please do not share it - it's for your eyes only!)